|Reviews for Not Our Destiny|
| beautyfan0102 chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
Very cute story.
| beauty12 chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
This was a really cute story.
| sami1010220 chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
| adah-chan chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
Hi dear, I really fall in love with this story, I read it like 100 time already, but its still my fav story ever. Thanks for creating such a wonderful story. Make some more. Heh...
| seacat03 chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
I really loved this story! It is nice to see a story where Spock is the one sure about the relationship.
| hana-to-mame chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
Wow! I loved this so much!
| sugarowls chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
The crayons and the lights were brilliant. xD That is CLEARLY an accurate depiction of Kirk's brain.
Also, this dialogue snippet made me laugh:
"Can I tell you something? As my BFF? Not my doctor?"
"Sure. But don't call me that," Bones said.
"You aren't my BFF?"
I imagine Kirk with a sad, mock puppy-dog expression.
| risaXrisa chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
Great job. I wish there was more to it
| The End of the Old Beginnings chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
I loved it!
| beauty0102 chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
great chapter can't wait for more so please update again and soon.
| MyriadProBold chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
Jim's aching feelings really came across. I like the use of crayons - the fort was really good.
I like the way Spock held onto Bones to have a way back out.
I especially like the happy ending.
I was really glad to see you posted this.
| Doni chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
Absolutely wonderful. I loved the lights and crayons ... somehow it's just fitting. Nice work with a Jim who is so terrified of the thought of losing Spock, that he decides it's better not to be with him at all. Thank goodness everyone else is a bit wiser.
| Karla Malfoy chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
Girl, for lack of better adjective in the English language that Jim is a complete idiot .. xD
The whole cute Spock aside from him and without realizing it? ohhh God ...
Fic perfect as always!
| Techno-Poet chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
Very good story!
Bones is amazing in this. And he's totally Jim's BFF, even if he claims it's stupid. XD
I like where Nyota talked with Jim about how he'd changed. It was a good moment. _
It's really cool that Jim's mind was made out of crayons and colors, showing his imagination and how some of him was still reliving parts of his childhood. And I really liked the image of Kirk watching memories like they were videos.
The story really worked out well!
| Blip-chan chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
That was really sweet...
I love the way you described Jim's mind. It worked really well, and I really loved that. And I love Bones in this. For me, it worked really well and I just want to hug him. Not that I ever don't want to hug him...XD