Reviews for Not Our Destiny
Crystalzap chapter 1 . 5/15/2015
nice :)
Kelly Reiger chapter 1 . 11/4/2014
Very well written. Thanks for sharing. Hope to read more of your work
delete-account-please 5149757 chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
Very cute story.
delete-account-please 4171342 chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
This was a really cute story.
sami1010220 chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
Good job!
adah-chan chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
Hi dear, I really fall in love with this story, I read it like 100 time already, but its still my fav story ever. Thanks for creating such a wonderful story. Make some more. Heh...
seacat03 chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
I really loved this story! It is nice to see a story where Spock is the one sure about the relationship.
hana-to-mame chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
Wow! I loved this so much!
sugarowls chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
The crayons and the lights were brilliant. xD That is CLEARLY an accurate depiction of Kirk's brain.

Also, this dialogue snippet made me laugh:

"Can I tell you something? As my BFF? Not my doctor?"

"Sure. But don't call me that," Bones said.

"You aren't my BFF?"

I imagine Kirk with a sad, mock puppy-dog expression.
risaXrisa chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
Great job. I wish there was more to it
The End of the Old Beginnings chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
Awesome story!

I loved it!
delete-account-please 742011 chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
great chapter can't wait for more so please update again and soon.
MyriadProBold chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
Jim's aching feelings really came across. I like the use of crayons - the fort was really good.

I like the way Spock held onto Bones to have a way back out.

I especially like the happy ending.

I was really glad to see you posted this.
Doni chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
Absolutely wonderful. I loved the lights and crayons ... somehow it's just fitting. Nice work with a Jim who is so terrified of the thought of losing Spock, that he decides it's better not to be with him at all. Thank goodness everyone else is a bit wiser.
Karla Malfoy chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
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Girl, for lack of better adjective in the English language that Jim is a complete idiot .. xD

The whole cute Spock aside from him and without realizing it? ohhh God ...

Fic perfect as always!

Kisses

Karla Malfoy
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