|Reviews for Blinded|
| Arianna Nevaz Roo chapter 10 . 9/20/2012
| Dragi chapter 10 . 11/15/2011
Seems sephiroth is happy again and now finaly knows cloud's true feelings wonder what will happen next :))
| LazyLamia chapter 10 . 11/8/2011
Cloud is really lucky cadet – he literally met Angel – without him he would have problem with an access to his general – and there would be no happy (and smutty) encounter in the office :P
| mikokatt chapter 10 . 11/7/2011
keep going with the stroy. and defenitly do the gen pairing. i want to kno wat crazy pairing u have planned for him.
| tails doll curse chapter 10 . 11/6/2011
I love the story how it is but I would like it if Genisis had a happy ending too. Maybe someonelike Reno or Rufus?
| Curry chapter 10 . 11/6/2011
Yeah Update! Can't wait for the Angeal and Zack chapter :)
| Kichou chapter 10 . 11/6/2011
Nice chapter. If you want the story to be longer, you can make it where Genesis decides that he will just have both Sephiroth and Cloud to himself (even though the two don't want that kind of realtionship). If you want the story to be short, you can just end it in the next few chapters with Genesis saying that he is not giving up (or pairing him with someone). Anyway, update soon please.
| Burning In The Dark chapter 10 . 11/5/2011
Your writing has improved a lot :) well done, the only thing I can say is just try not to make some paragraphs too long... About 6 lines is enough, however I know how different it is from Microsoft word to :p so excuse that if it's different otherwise.. well all I can say is well done and I hope you improve...
Sorry for the past review, was merely trying to help, sorry if it was harsh, I apologise.
| Senna Sylvan chapter 9 . 7/18/2011
Ahh! I feel so bad for Genesis. Will he at least find some love at the end? Can't wait for the next update.
| Burning In The Dark chapter 9 . 5/28/2011
Your Characterisation is all one dimensional... seriously _ You started the story with allure of a sex scene, poorly written might I add. Which is what probably got everyones attention... Have you ever played the game? I assume you have so credit to you. I played it too.
Why do you just write a line? have you never heard of paragraphing? Honestly. I am trying to be nice _
I hope you can improve or find yourself a beta! Best of Luck.
| Burning In The Dark chapter 8 . 5/28/2011
Oh my god... I am sorry but... I kind of realised this was your first story about them... it needs a bit of fixing to be honest.
if you really want you can check out my stories and critique them too... (:
| LazyLamia chapter 9 . 4/28/2011
Uh , it looks like Zack is very busy playing Cupid for Cloud and Seph - without him Cloud surely stayed in the clutches of Genesis - he was too compliant, letting himslef to be kissed like this. If he loves Seph, he should show more resistance for Genesis' advances. Anyway he should fight for this love. I hope that Seph let him convince himself that his feeling are true. (Meaningful glares in Cloud's direction)
| Yzzy chapter 9 . 4/21/2011
I like how Angeal would blush,ji,ji,ji. Its kind of sweet. Sorry, Genesis. I feel like Zack about you.
Cloud shout Seph that you really love him 3
| Yzzy chapter 8 . 4/21/2011
Yeah, battle for Cloud's love!
| Yzzy chapter 7 . 4/21/2011
:-( Poor little Seph. You shouldn't hurt yourself.