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| Guest chapter 3 . 3/11
MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER PLEASSEE
| yoyoyo98 chapter 3 . 2/23
Definitely continue this! It's very interesting and there aren't many multi-chap VanVen fics. As for making Vanitas lose interest in him . . . maybe a change of appearance? Trying to look more plain or unnoticeable? Anyway, I really like this story so far, and can't wait for the next update!
| itsmebryant1 chapter 3 . 6/30/2013
i don't much but all i can say is what would you do and i like your story post more
| Thecrimsonfoxdemon chapter 3 . 12/9/2012
| VanVenFan chapter 3 . 8/28/2012
Hey I really enjoyed this story and am disappointed that you're considering dropping it. :(
But, as for answering your questions:
1) Um, I can't really think of what Ven could do besides liking someone else, but maybe he could get hypnotized and a complete personality change? Towards Vanitas, I mean. (I was actually thinking about amnesia, but that might make Vani try to make Ven remember more...) But, this might take your story in a complete direction, so if if it doesn't fit with what you want, don't use it.
2) It's alright to pair up Cloud and Zack, but as for Roxas and Sora . . . well, I've always been an AkuRoku and SoRiku supporter, but it's you're story and I won't complain about what pairings you've planned for this story.
3) For one, I DO want you to continue this story. There aren't very many VanVen stories out there, and this one is good enough for me to read, so I don't want to see it die if there's a possibility that it'll reach completion. So, if you can, please continue this story (and maybe your other ones too?) because I really am interested in all that will happen next.
| Natsume1111 chapter 2 . 8/26/2012
I loved your fiction. Vanitas is really ... perverse but I love it when he teases Ventus. It's cute and funny.
Of course I want a sequel, it will ruin a fiction and a tiller.
I hope to see more soon then.
| Zyrxi chapter 3 . 6/2/2012
I think Ven would need a lot of luck to get Vani to lose interest :) Loving this so far, it made me smile so much and your portrayal of the characters is great.
I like most pairings so I reckon go for it, and definately want you to continue this!
| Natsume1111 chapter 3 . 5/11/2012
I really enjoyed your fiction.
I love it when Vanitas teases Ventus, it's so adorable. -
I do not really want you to add another couple because every time I read a Fiction Vanitas x Ventus, there are another couple. It's your fiction, you do is you want.
I hope soon expect to see more.
| Mitsuno chapter 3 . 1/18/2012
Hey I want to let you know that I love this story so far and I really love all the ship pairings in the story! Please update soon, I can't wait to see how their relationship will develop Van is a sexy molester !
| HikariKH chapter 3 . 12/19/2011
SoRokuCloudxZack in an VaniVen story is win, if you're wondering. And maybe Ven could tell Vanitas just what he can get Cloud to do to him to make him lose interest /badidea
Anyways, this story is awesome, you should continue.
| HanaKumo chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
It was cute on how it came out in the beginning... but i lost interest... ;u;
| Lady Ri of Cherith chapter 3 . 11/21/2011
instant love! and I don't even ship them xD
| HawkRider chapter 3 . 11/11/2011
I really love this chapter. You are a very good author. Now for the questions.
1) Hmmm...Make Ven hit Vani, Ven has a short period of dating Reno, Cloud threatens Vani...I'll PM you if I think of more.
2) PLEASE DO! Just make it Roxas/Sora. Cloud/Zack is also brilliant.
3) YES! Times the highest number you can think of to the power of that same number. I beseech you to write more.
| HawkRider chapter 2 . 11/11/2011
This chapter is brilliant, though I think that you should have called it 'Attack of the Fangirls'.
| nyahxneko chapter 3 . 10/23/2011
HOW COULD YOU NOT FINISH THIS D:?
You're a wonderful writer; so happy I discovered your VaniVen fics.
YOU INCLUDED RENO /sobs/ NO ONE INCLUDES RENO ANYMORE /3 Haha and Soroku is another nice touch 3 Oh Roxas, you jealous little thing.
So far, it's excellent. Don't hold back :D Seriously, I'm waiting for you to update! Of course, you have to have time BUT I'LL WAIT VERY VERY PATIENTLY.
Thanks for reading my stuff and writing this :D