so much info at once, she killed her whole family

why are they going so fast

this is too cringe

I really enjoyed the love and passion in this story. I prefer when they get together early and go through things together. A new favourite.

so I totally love how you took creative liberties and just glossed over things that would be too complex (and a deviation from the plot) to explain... like her just taking a house lol

Lol "I got over my past" *sigh* I guess we all can't be sociopaths

This story is hot garbage.

this story was a mess but in the best way possible. will definitely be saving to read again

hmm. okay. i do not even know what to say. please take no offense, but this a mess. a huge one. can't say i liked it, but it did help pass the time. so, yeah, thanks for sharing

I was intrigued by the summary. but, well, this is crazy. I thought Edward would be the worst character, with his aggressive behavior (which is instigated by fucking nothing). but then Bella is psychopath. so maybe they do belong together

Great story. Thank you.

In the movie interview with a vampire I had hated how they changed that child and made her immortal. It was like being cursed for the rest of eternity. They should have at least waited till she was 15, even 14 would have been better.

What she did wasn’t ok. They shouldn’t be saying sorry to her, she’s a murderer. I’m disappointed you made her a murderer and than made it ok in the story.

She definitely sounds like a monster. I don’t like this Bella, she killed innocent Charlie and clueless Renee. They never hurt her and didn’t deserve to be murdered. I might understand killing your abuser even though her shooting him was extreme but I can’t reconcile the rest of her actions.

Sounds interesting but a man trying to dominate a female is a bit of a pet peeve. That wouldn’t be too bad if you made it sound like a female vampire had no say in who she’s with. It sounded like any male could kill her mate and claim her against her will.