Reviews for Mates For Eternity
Emily chapter 29 . 9/28
That was amazing
boopgirl chapter 29 . 8/14
Interesting plot
eastwest chapter 8 . 6/30
I had to stop reading. This needs more editing. Too many mistakes and non-words. Are you ESL?
TWILIGHT FOREVER812 chapter 14 . 5/27
Wow! You really put some thought into her human life. I loved it.
kushka chapter 29 . 5/23
Ok story
shelbyharton chapter 27 . 5/5
Fell in love with this story, finished it in 2 days but will still be reading it again. Amazing.
Ally chapter 7 . 4/20
I tried. I really did. I picked your story thinking it was going to be fun and a little different than what I'm used to reading when it comes to the Cullens still being vampires. It sure was different, but not better and certainly not fun.

Why the hell is Bella so insecure? She just goes along with Edward treating her like his property in front of everyone at a new school. "Even your body knows it belongs to me" that was the last line I read of chapter seven, and the last line I read of your entire story.

If Bella is a VAMPIRE then I feel like she shouldn't be acting like a 15 year old girl who can't see an abusive realarionahip when she's in one. I think you had good intentions, but you're missing a lot of what makes a story great.
yuki chapter 28 . 4/16
Can you please write another twiligth story but this time its caius x oc but make the oc heartless and cruel fitting for wicked caius. Please
Vampire and Ocean chapter 11 . 3/3
I like the idea behind the story, but what kind of vampire is Bella, for God's sake? She goes into a shock, her 'supposedly extraordinary' mind becomes numb when she think about her transformation, she 'bumpes' into some while walking? Feeling extremely insecure before Edward, while recognizing him as her mate? Especially the last one bug me the most: why are you feeling so insecure?

As I said, idea is good, but there are major character flaws. Bella feels extremely guilty and insecure, yet decides to go to high school to be amongst humans? (Also, why does no human have self-preservation against Bella?) Alice is so OOC that it is sad to read her parts. Why would she interrupt an emotional talk between E and B?
parkesy23 chapter 16 . 2/25
Oh. Loving it
parkesy23 chapter 15 . 2/24
Love it thank you
parkesy23 chapter 13 . 2/24
Oh not good.
parkesy23 chapter 8 . 2/24
parkesy23 chapter 7 . 2/24
Great. Thanks H
parkesy23 chapter 5 . 2/24
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