|Reviews for The Hand We're Dealt|
| angel's lil devil angel chapter 22 . 10/25/2011
Go Neale! That was awesome watching her give the admiralty what was coming to them. Also the command crew planning to resign for Bones was brillaint. Sadly not too much Bones/Spock interaction. Hope there is some more in the next chapter.
| Jojo chapter 21 . 10/9/2011
Hugs for bones!
| FrozenLights chapter 21 . 10/8/2011
Interesting - I've seen similar plotlines that end up with horribly OC characters, but you manage to balance it pretty well XD
thanks for facilitating my procrastination on hw tehehe
| jeanwolverine52895 chapter 21 . 10/5/2011
| T'Arrah chapter 21 . 10/4/2011
Very good. Leonard better stop being so stubborn. He will endanger those babies if he doesn't go with Spock and he would never forgive himself. I can't see how they could even break the bond. Poor guys they're gonna be miserable the rest of their lives it seems.
| SparklyLalala chapter 21 . 10/4/2011
what the hell? I mean what the hell is wrong with admirality? Len is a very capable doctor and he can take care of his pregnancy, and in any case if there is a need to study it then that A-hole of a doctor that is interested to make him and babies his gunea pigs can get his ass on Enterprise. Aditionally, Spock is the best Science officer in the Fleet so of course that data that two of them find are going to be relevant. I cannot believe that they would want to risk their lives like that! Leaves a bad taste in the mouth, and imagine the court martial...and publicity around it. Nice one guys, very. Really cannot stand Boyce right now, nor Pike for that matter.
Oh, Sarek continues to be an a-hole as well. What the effing ef dude? They need to find that kid!
Plot keeps tickening :) and what a great chapter :) :) :D.
| EmperialGem21 chapter 21 . 10/4/2011
Welcome back from vacation :D, love the fact that that Rhys is alive and hopefully Scarlett will be able to see her son again. Good lord does Bones never get a break? :( great chapter and can't wait for the next one! Hope its a quicky :D.
| Wolfa Moon chapter 21 . 10/4/2011
New Chapter, WAHOO! Can't the federation leave them alone. If i was leonard i would run away. and i believe jim would go with if asked. Bones is his BF. And if asked he would risk a court martial for his friend. Take him whereever he wanted and damn the circumstances. And i ope Scarlet gets to see Rhys again. Great story. Update Faster!
| EmperialGem21 chapter 20 . 9/24/2011
Well now i have to search for another story while I wait for another chapter from you. Damn this story took me at least 2 days straight to read it. I, absolutely love everything about it and only wish that you would update faster.
| Janet chapter 20 . 9/15/2011
Len should just fall for Jim and Spock can go with Scarlet! ;P haha dysfunctional families! Anyway you go with this I'm sure I'll enjoy it! You sure know how to write addicting stories!
| Hastseoltoi chapter 20 . 9/13/2011
Very good; there are a lot of heavy emotional themes in the story and while I sometimes wonder if you are going to fall into the thing that so many writers do- a simple fix for rape victims is to fall in love with the rapist (which is bs in real life), you haven't yet so I keep reading.
I am disturbed by the complete lack of respect for individual civil rights in your Federation and Starfleet. I always enjoyed the canon Trek for the adherence to the rights and liberties of individuals (at least those within the Federation) and would hate to live in the one you have created.
| LadyBaelish chapter 20 . 9/6/2011
ooooooh please don't take Leonard away! Spock will behave, right? And please, find someone to love Jim (why not Spock Prime?)
I'm waiting patiently (yeah, sure) for the next one! Go on!
| SparklyLalala chapter 20 . 9/6/2011
the hits just keep cominggggg...Oh dear God, just when Spock tries to find his footing, the rug goes from under his feet.
M'Benga's behavior is appalling, it was when he deleted the findings in Bones, and it especially is now when he "defended" his reasons for doing it. I can already see him asking for transfer to go with Bones to make his career. Despicable.
Well shit, Starfleet and Colony are not thinking straight...has the fact that Leonard might be so distraught with going to Station that it might harm him and kiddies crossed anyone's mind? colony did not take into consideration that Spock needs to maintain the bond, and Bones as well for the sake of kids? Why not get two experts on board with them and conduct the monitoring with as less disturbance as possible? Additionally, Enterprise going to Cardassian part...hell, that has trouble written all over it :S. From that part it would be better for Bones not to be on the ship, but for Spock as well :S. Woman, for all that is holly, update soon! :D
| shini-noeru chapter 20 . 9/6/2011
I was afraid that like so many stories, after several chapters of a dark story, it would fall into a too tragic and a little boring one, but no.
Your story is still very much alive and entertaining. Your style is still just right with the story, and you keep your characters almost in their normal behaviour.
But please, please post regularly, it's just too much stress to wait for the next chapter ;-p.
Keep up the good work!
| jeanwolverine52895 chapter 20 . 9/6/2011