|Reviews for Wish For The Past|
| rookieboy999 chapter 7 . 1/15
I'm liking the story so far, but I can't help feeling like you barely know things about dragon ball z, I probaly won't feel like your a db noob in later chapters though.
| Coley chapter 1 . 8/21/2016
looks really good! the writing is well done, the plot is intresting. my one complaint(and this is a bit of a nitpick) is that in cannon, shenron usually plays straight with your wishes(he gives you exactly what you want) but you could argue that deep in his heart goten may of wanted this
| thecjkid chapter 1 . 7/1/2016
I tried to read this...I really did. but the random bits of Japanese are cringe worthy. got 8 chapters in before I couldn't do it anymore, f I could just find and replace this weeaboo stuff I would. but thAt's work.
| Guest chapter 70 . 5/29/2016
I'm not sure if your still writing but I enjoyed this story and now looking for its sqequels! Um, I might of mentioned this before (I can't keep everything I read in order) but in one of your "advertisements" could you recommend a webcomic called "Prequel Adventure" I'll put down the URL at the end. It's a pretty cute story and you may have read it, it's right down your ally in humor and Katia is fucking adorable! I think you'll enjoy it, read the side stories to. I'm not the guy who wrote for the record! I'm just a very zealous fan of it. Anyways love your story and keep it up. Or maybe this will go to the dump of "messages never received because the person is not thier anymore so the message will float on lonely winds of the internet" oh how I do do enjoy making books inside of a novel online! I think it's long enough to be a n
| Guest chapter 28 . 5/25/2016
Wait you called her lunch again? Crap, I know some changes in area change names and stuff so sorry!
| Guest chapter 27 . 5/25/2016
"Oh, that's okay," Goku chirped happily. "We can go to Master Roshi's island! Lunch is a great cook and she always has lots of food. And then you can meet my friends Krillen and Turtle and Lunch and Master Roshi! Master Roshi has been teaching me and Krillen how to fight."
Lunch makes food? Nice! Sorry has to point it out
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/24/2016
Bit early to review but "breaths I sharply) live action dragon ball? Sorry trunks but your at -6
| DumplinTDG chapter 2 . 5/23/2016
I'm sure you've heard this before, but your fanfic is a little sloppy. No breaks between different character POVs, the use of very "weebish" words like Tousan and the likes, and a lot false info. I honestly would've done more research before writing, as right off the bat there are a few things wrong. To only name one, Goku was barely a few days old at the time of Planet Vegeta's destruction. Again, I'm sure you've heard this all before. However, I do intend to keep reading. If your fanfic can rank up 3rd in reviews, right behind two of my favorite DBZ fanfics to date, then I will most certainly keep reading to find out why.
| Guest chapter 36 . 5/2/2016
Burma acts like a 11 year old girl most of them are every bit as hemmm excitable as she is portrayed lol
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/1/2016
Vegeta is Aprox 7
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/1/2016
Goku was a new born bout a year old bardock just put him in before attacking freiza
| dragoncaller45 chapter 30 . 4/13/2016
You need to like, show when a chapters over with a line or something...it gets confusing now and again
| dragoncaller45 chapter 28 . 4/12/2016
Even if you don't say their name people can look at the reviews and find them, maybe useless, but the sentiment was still very kind...also to others reading this no it was not me
| dragoncaller45 chapter 17 . 4/11/2016
2 things, 1 just so you know, Recoome is spelled with o's. 2 Also jsyk Burter is taller
| dragoncaller45 chapter 12 . 4/11/2016
Water has no scent