Reviews for Alice, The Girl Who Did Not Survive
RestlessBlue chapter 1 . 11/18/2014
I found typographical errors throughout, but the story is good. It's easy to connect with Alice, Ethan and Carter. You could write some *really* good stories if you'll refine your skill. Everyone has it if they'll work. Keep it up. )
niniya chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
THIS IS SO AWESOME! I LOVED IT AND IT WOULD HAVE BEEN AWESOME IF YOU CONTINUED IT ! OTHER THAN THAT, I THOUGHT IT WAS GREAT!
Sky Master-99 chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
Wow. Sad.
ouoi0u0iouo chapter 1 . 5/11/2011
God, I loved this ! It's really dramatic and sad, but not 'to much', you know? It really shows how desperate people can get, and the things you do. I love it that you send the army to go and search for survivors. Good job !
lanternheart chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
poor Alice, she was so brave :(