Reviews for Building Bridges
Imagen99 chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
I really like the descriptive techniques you used :)

'Smouldering' and other vocab was great.
Aureleis chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
Oh, very well done indeed! You managed to capture the characters' personalities quite accurately. Nicely written.


SimplySupreme chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
That was rather sweet. :)
A Changing Persona chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
Well, appreciate away! Anyways, nice, sweet story. Almost everybody else's stories are either too fast or too slow.
Lazielow chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
Awesome job ! XP
Mysterious Girl X chapter 1 . 3/9/2011
good. i liked it :)
Electric Reader chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
3 3 3 3
Reviewer chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
This is very well written, well done. I especially liked the sentence structures and your choice of vocabulary (amazing!) You have also kept Eragon&Arya in character, although I would've preferred it to be more angsty (but that's just me), or insert an event that would leave a bigger impact on readers. But, I take it that this is something more of a helping fic to get you started again on your HP fic?

Nevertheless, it's an exceptional piece of work. The plot would have been better if you had sustained it longer, with building up of tension. Anyway, great fic! _

Peanutbuttercup526 chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
Awwww! :) I loved it. Good job!