|Reviews for Generation X: Alternate Future|
| Mike N chapter 3 . 5/14/2011
Definitely an interesting story. I like the Victor character, and the way you’ve brought him into the story.
I’m surprised that Jubilee would be the first person you’d have him interact with though. If his features are similar to Sabretooth, remember that she and Sabretooth have bad history…I don’t think she would take too warmly to a mini-Sabretooth look-alike. Regardless, I like the interaction between the two of them.
You’ve stayed true to the characters that you’ve introduced as well, which is a positive thing. I would suggest just some more narrative to help paint the picture for the reader.
I’m glad to see some other folks still making Generation X stories! Keep going!