|Reviews for Prey for the Wicked|
| Guest chapter 22 . 7/4
love your story...as well as your writing skills...wish you would update...thanks for sharing...
| Guess who again chapter 22 . 6/8
I keep checking for updates. Your writing is amazing. You are going to make me break down and make an official account after years of lurking, aren't you? Fingers crossed that you will be sharing more with us.
| FlamingMaple chapter 22 . 5/12
It pleases me to NO end that you're thinking of completing this. Awesome. I am able to applaud for what you've written so far, now that my hands are free from reading this excellent tale.
| TrillionSchiffer chapter 2 . 4/3
Hmmm... I wonder if Bella and Edwards 'assumptions' of one another character is more 'miss' than hit. The fact that he can't just 'know' what her issues are and they are mainly maintaining a strong sexual relationship (Or at least one held together by sex, and the mating bond) I wonder if that prevents them from mentally stepping back and looking for other clues as to what is wrong with the other person, and how to properly 'maneuver' so that the other person doesn't come off so 'harsh'.
Its kinda like each has a piece of a clue about the other and are trying to let everything fit that one clue instead of looking for more.
Edward is all predator and shit but has yet to realize he would get further with a softer tact. And Bella has a mental glitch for sure. There is no doubt in my mind she suffers from Trauma. The way she grew up... pfft... that is more than enough to scar her, no matter how tough she is 'acting'. Somehow... Edward needs this information. He needs to know how things were with Renee. He needs the piece of the puzzle. And I'm kinda surprised he doesn't have it. That should be public record right? A google search should be enough to obtain that.
| TrillionSchiffer chapter 12 . 4/2
Okay I'm lost. Edward left the family because he doesn't want to live the lie and off animal blood. But it looks like the Cullen have become quite industrious comes to human blood. So apparently they aren't as forces on animal blood being a prerequisite as I originally thought. If that was the case why did Edward get an ultimatum? Why didn't when the family made ? Because it looks like the family mixes between animal and human blood these days. So why the distance?
| Guest Who chapter 22 . 3/29
Just checking back again in case you return to the scene of this PRIME...story. I check in yearly or so because your writing is simply beyond my descriptive abilities. Like others, I hope you are well and writing - somewhere - because your gifts are too precious to keep to yourself. *Bowing*
| Tisha Jo chapter 22 . 2/13
I have been following this story since it’s inception. I had it bookmarked and decided to revisit it during the Matt weather this weekend. It’s such a fabulous Fic. One of my favorites. I do wish you’d complete it!
| KDMCAM chapter 22 . 12/11/2017
I really really hope you finish this! It's really AMAZING!
| noflowers chapter 22 . 12/4/2017
wow! i just saw my comments above from the first time I read this and it was exactly one year ago!
you absolutely, hands down, wrote the best darkward ever. how I wish you had been able to complete it. best wishes to you and happy holidays.
| dpennell007 chapter 22 . 11/23/2017
Amazing, descriptive writing! I loved your complicated, passionate Edward, and am so sad his story will always remain unresolved. For anyone debating whether or not to read this - I say YES - it's a fabulous story, and well worth your time.
| Kats Flower Girls chapter 22 . 11/17/2017
No, no, no... it can't end here!
I know this story has so many more places to go and I can't wait to read what you spin...
I, along with many of your other fans I'm sure, really hope your health issues cease and desist so you can write more...
I need more Jake and Leah...
More Tyler and Lauren...
More Charlie, Sue and Billy...
And of course more Preyward and his Isabella!
Take care and hope to hear from you soon : )
| Kats Flower Girls chapter 21 . 11/17/2017
You do such an amazing job with secondary characters, I love this Tyler!
There's only one more chapter left, oh no!
| Kats Flower Girls chapter 20 . 11/17/2017
I love all the Jake/Leah stuff... is she preggers?! Gotta know!
I also am looking forward to seeing where you go with their relationship ...
I hope you feel better and can keep writing more because I love it!
| Kats Flower Girls chapter 19 . 11/14/2017
Hello : )
I haven't been around for years, but decided to visit some of my old favorites, to see if some of them had been completed... so here I am, falling for prey ward all over again and since I'm still team Jacob, loving how you still keep him awesome just not the one meant for Bella
| cutie123r chapter 22 . 9/17/2017
I love this