Reviews for Pansy's Revenge
raiyana chapter 26 . 10/5
Not sure if the question still stands, but the age discrepancy is probably due to the fact that pansy etc are all still 18 at the time of the adoption. In earlier chapters it sounded like Todd was a baby or small child, but he's obviously beyond toddler age after the she'd have had him at 12ish based on his level of speech? Also he was introduced as a war orphan, which should mean that his parents were dead, not that his mother had given him up. I think he's a somewhat redundant plot device, and if you ever rewrite the tale, possibly change his parentage or age. He could plausibly have been the child of an older sibling or cousin if you want to use the pansy-is-a-shrew angle. In conclusion, it's fun to see how much you have improved over time in your writing when comparing this story to your more recent ones. Good luck going forward
Guest chapter 17 . 10/1
Why weren't the lions in the room?
Guest chapter 1 . 8/29
(Sneer) No doubt the ring's an cheap ugly one, just like the weasel's mother...
I'm All Teeth chapter 3 . 8/28
this chapter really helps the enormity of what they've done set in. I liked the little tick of Ron at the end there. the juxtaposition if the kisses was great too. nice job!
mashiro.x.shiina chapter 26 . 8/26
This was an enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing!
I'm All Teeth chapter 2 . 8/26
A nice second installment. I like how you've characterized Hermione's mother here.
I'm All Teeth chapter 1 . 8/26
I love this premise! a clever Pansy is a nice change from what tends to be standard in this fandom, too. Well doneclever, funny and well written. I'm hooked!
Phlogiston15 chapter 14 . 8/18
The Malfoy pets are too damn adorable :D Loving it a lot :)
CynthiaPotter chapter 26 . 6/15
Great story! Thank you for writing it!
Guest chapter 10 . 6/11
these are some other Dramione fanfictions you should read if you enjoyed reading this story. growing up well, to the end of the Earth and back. dramione story: ignite the night/ conquer the night, the 2000 galleon bet, the battle of the highest, meetings, falling for my past, a person can change, the facebook, partners, accepted, a thousand years, forbidden shadows, the baby project, the part after, leaving the past behind, loving you (dramione), Dramione: lost in love, last lesson in love, and tutoring a malfoy.
Miss-Margaux-Malfoy chapter 26 . 6/2
I love love love love love love love this story :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
Guest chapter 4 . 5/20
Absolutely not me, that's for sure, the ugly ginger troll
deserves it and a lot more besides...
nk01 chapter 26 . 5/3
Kleptokitten chapter 26 . 4/16
Very clever story! I loved the character development and interactions :)
jkrowlingrox chapter 26 . 3/5
Cute story!
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