You should give him some fire and lightning jutsus too if he combined wind with fire or lightning with water that combo would be decistating if enough chakra if added to it.

well, i would suggest summoning jutsu, but that'd be overkill. how about "yomi numa", that jutsu kakashi pulled on sasuke during the bell test, and, this is a suggestion for later, like a few chapters from now, "suiryudan no jutsu"

Very nice chapter. Not really any comments on it other than for a chapter without any action (except at the end) it still flowed really nicely with the others. I appreciate how you set up the timeline from last chapter and all the small details in the beggining. (It being a few days later, Fang and Naruto's standing, even why Naruto wasn't dressing up as Kitsune while Selena was away (which was good thinking on their parts in my opinion)

My only critique, which is really more of a question (and even then it's a small one) Would be why Miss Martian read Artemis's mind at the mall, and then read Babs's, since it was established in the show, like episode 3 I think, that she shouldn't do that unless it's absolutely necessary? Just curious if it was because it wasnt a mission or something.

Oh, and I really liked Naruto blowing the dudes leg off, granted not his head, and then applying first aid. I found that funny for some reason.

I can't wait to see what happens next; will the other members of Young Justice show up? What will happen with Selena and Batman in Egypt? Are members of the Justice League going to show up in Batman stead to help Batgirl? Will I ever get it over with and end this review with something like: keep up the awesome frequent updates?

The henge, it was interesting

Here's a thought. Have Naruto master the Transformation Technique to a ridiculous extent then have him enter a shapeshifting battle with M'gan.

Forever Signed in Blood,

Slayer End

Nice... Now Artemis can feel vindicated about crushing on Kitsune as he's not a villain anymore not exactly a Hero either but maybe he can get Artemis and bat-girl to his view. It would be the ultimate revenge on batman for Selena.

You cood have Naruto learn 1000 year of death

If I were Naruto in that situation I would at least load a round into Jokers kneecaps. Nice touch with the fox, amps up the 'aww' factor.

If you want a place that has most of the jutsus that have been recorded down then go to then look under the Jutsu Info section along the left side of the screen choose the Ninjutsu for a complete A-Z list of techniques with ones of elemental class being in the color of their respectable element in front of them. Also nice story so far.

great chapter cant wait for the canfrontation with Joker and see if he dicides to put the clown down for good or not and what are Batgirl and the other gonna do.

You just have to love that. Excellent work, please update soon, ja ne.

now that has a lot of excellent transitional qualities

going from best apprentice crook to anti-hero

marvelously done looking forward to the next chapter

I can totally see Naruto as an anti-hero. Though is some cases Batman is too. Anyway, great chapter. I can't wait for the next one!

Doomsday is a living weapon that killed Superman in the movie and comic Superman: Doomsday. The alien overlord is Darkside and he is the ruler of Apocolypse. Also for Naruto's water manipulation are you going to have up to the level of the Atlanteans in the Young Justice episode (when I saw that episode I immediatly thought of your story and Naruto doing those things).

really cool cant wait for more