Reviews for Bloom
NoLongerActive11111 chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
:) I liked this one a lot. In a way, it is like Chopin's piece that inspired you - simple but powerful. Even the theme is fitting, water. Fire playing with water? I wouldn't say your poetic mood died, not at all. XD It creates a vivid atmosphere of... withering, I would say. Of melancholy. And the language is very rich.

The only thing - this style of thinking is more suited to Genesis. But you know how picky I am with Seph's character. :)

Glad to have you back!

Yours,

- NR -
Gavrilushka chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
This better just be the start sister! You and your silly chopping...

What do you mean your poetic mind has died, and yes, finish your borscht! Your poetry will come back to you if you eat.

Though, as always, without bias and whatnot, you have this unique spirit in your writing which you probably cannot see, but which others can. You're so central to setting and how it mirrors emotions - obviously Poe and Shakespeare have pierced your heart with good intention.

Keep it up, sis. You'll improve with your health (stop pushing yourself!).

Much love,

Your брат, Ivan.