|Reviews for Lord of the Flies|
| Yuti-Chan chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
Please write more!
| moonylover-ottie chapter 1 . 5/22/2006
Please! update son! We have to read this book currently in English class and your version is much better, not to mention shorter.
| hope chapter 1 . 12/4/2002
the point of JACK being red-headed is that it represents anger. Ralph (or Sarah) has to be blond. Marron should be spelled maroon. The quality is a bit week-needs better description, and less awkward wording.
| Elizabeth11 chapter 1 . 5/18/2002
i like it. you're a great writer. my only problem is that the girl isn't really acting like one. she is kinda but tomboyish. and shes kinda mean to petunia. i kinda wish there were guys in it but...to each his/her own. great story i hope you continue it.
| running with scissors chapter 1 . 3/25/2002
Good job. _ Hope to see more soon!
| Berty 'n Beans chapter 1 . 3/24/2002
Berty - well done... Naturally. Good job kat... Prongs