Reviews for Sickness Brings you Closer Redo
wolfeclipse25 chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Hmmm... If you continue this, I'd like to see if Marth dies. I liked this! You could add more to it if you want.
Mark of the Asphodel chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
This is a sweet little story. Usually sick!fics are too sappy, but this one is nicely done- it's good that Zelda has a sensible motivation to visit (the letters piling up), and it's refreshing that she just drops in for a friendly chat instead of having Marth's illness be an excuse for kissing or cuddling or something unrealistic. Zelda and Marth both came across as adults here, which is *very* nice to see.

You had a couple of typos; "Smash Mansion" wasn't always capitalized, and this sentence ("They were unable to leave there beds") you put "there" instead of "their." Also, this sentence ("He nodded every now and then, showing that he was paying princess concluded") looks like two sentences accidentally run together.

But overall I quite enjoyed this.