Reviews for Ah! My Demoness
GNXmike chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
Okay, Oh My Goddess!, I've never seen, so I can't judge your portrayal of Mara. Rival Schools, I ain't played it in probably 97 years, so my memory of the game is totally fucked up. Sorry.

As for your fic as a story, it's very intriguing. It's also very well written and descriptive, since I'm not too familiar with these characters. I'd like to see what this story will lead to.

I don't know what you have in store, but you may find it fit to make it for a mature audience, that way it can unfold without any limitations due to ratings.

Keep it up!

r0cK 0n! Pe4C3!