|Reviews for Refraction|
| littenstinymittens chapter 36 . 5/14
I know this was done years ago, but this story was absolutely amazing. One of the best ones I read. I loved the twists and turns it took, such a perfect au. I know it isn't what is normally considered an AU, that's just the only way I can describe it. Anyways, this was a joy to read from start to finish.
| Guest chapter 21 . 2/7
Who is Rupert?
| Nance chapter 21 . 2/7
I think this is your best work in terms of originality, creativity, plot and character development, and dialogue. All your writing is fantastic. However, Refraction is exemplary.
| ChristineBH chapter 28 . 11/20/2016
I love this story so far. It has everything a story should have. Excitement, feelings towards and with the characters, and a bit of humor.
But poor Balinor. He probably loves everything about his son except his ability to find pets. Good thing Balinor at least could convince Merlin they couldn't keep Gwaine as a pet some chapters back. That would have been an expensive addition to the family since I have heard he requires things you can't find in the forest such as alcohol. Oh well, I guess Gwaine will forever be a stay cat.
| Ihatechoosinganame chapter 36 . 11/1/2016
Wow amazing story. I loved every aspect of it. I loved Cenred and Balinor. You have a very impressive ability to tell stories
| Jaclyn420 chapter 36 . 10/27/2016
Love the story pls update
| Aaronna chapter 36 . 10/18/2015
I love this ending! Though, I would love to see Arthur and Mithian get married!
| Aaronna chapter 21 . 10/17/2015
I love Cenred's last line. Also, I feel I need to congratulate you for being the first writer I have found who has turned Cenred good. I rather enjoy him this way.
| Aaronna chapter 17 . 10/17/2015
I thing this is my favorite chapter yet! Great job!
| Teekalin chapter 36 . 5/25/2015
I loved it. This has become one iof my favourite non romantic fic so far :-)
I like to think that Merlin and Morgana gets together but I can tell by the last line that it will be Merthur.
| LanCheer chapter 36 . 4/18/2015
I just finished reading and oh my god this is probably the best alternative canon I've ever seen. It's so beautiful! I'm crazy for it! Your writing is gorgeous! And the plot! OH my god the plot! How did you manage to write like this? I'm jealous like a mad woman! When reading the epilogue I was slightly afraid that Arthur would marry Mithian, I'm glad you made it clear that Merlin is Arthur's real love.
I had so many feelings when I read the story. The dialogues are apparently amazing! I love this story so much! Your writing has this sense of genuineness in it and that is really precious. Thank you for writing such a fantastic story! I definitely love you now!
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/16/2015
Very nice! I do hope that your Merlin turns out mostly like the original, though. Ayla never did get sure enough enough of herself to talk back for no good reason. (But I haven't read the seventh yet) Thanks!
| DragonThetan chapter 36 . 10/4/2014
Wonderful story! I really enjoyed reading it!
But please in the future watch your word usage, 'border' instead of 'boarder' is just one example, there are others too!
| DragonThetan chapter 19 . 10/3/2014
I am enjoying the story! But please fix the following, I'm tired of seeing it!
"The boarder(the word spelt here does NOT mean the line between 2 or more things as used here, it means someone who pays for lodging & food at someone's home, someone living away from home for schooling, someone who enters or leaves a ship or a sport where a board is used like snowboarding! The word that should be used here is 'border.') between the two kingdoms had become shaky at best,..."
| cindy4651 chapter 36 . 7/16/2014
Lovely story, thanks so much!