|Reviews for There Will Be Freedom|
| SiriuslyPink chapter 26 . 1/8
E and B should have had Alice, Jasper and co help them gather their most valuables, the snake, the cars, and all the clothes before they dropped the bomb. Why didn't you have them think about that?
| SiriuslyPink chapter 2 . 1/7
Now his back? You've gotta stop making Edward's body go out like this. He's only 29. My dad is in his 50s, doesn't exercise, and has none of these problems. Organ damage is irreversible and now his back? He's not even 30.
| SiriuslyPink chapter 1 . 1/7
I thought no one knew about that island?
| Azlady2003 chapter 1 . 1/3
Will you be moving your stories to another site, since ffnet has some of your stories (this one included) on the to be deleted list?
| Guest chapter 19 . 1/1
I was searching just for the part when Edward chokes Jill. Classic.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/29/2013
best fanfic i've ever read, I absolutely loved these two stories. Definitely need a trequal whoa
| LesleyLunaCullen chapter 11 . 12/26/2013
Ok, you know I have a beef with Charlie but my main one is year #2 in jail. Didn't he cut her off? If so, which I think Bella talks about in TWBB EPILOGUE, what was his plan if she hadn't gone to Brazil? Was he looking because she wasn't begging for his help which equated to him realizing the Cullens were still in her life so he had to save her? I am really trying to understand this man and if he is just embarrassed and trying to control the situation or is it love because I don't feel love. I mean yes, he loved her enough to mortgage his home but that road leads back to pride. I think he loves her to a point but as I said, I have felt like he has questionable motivation.
| LesleyLunaCullen chapter 42 . 12/21/2013
In the words of Edward, I fucking loved it! I would love an outtake of the trial, especially Bella's testimony. I was very surprised that Jacob was the final name on the list. I really thought that after Edwards deal, he would have let bygones be bygones but in true Edward thinking, he would never get over Bella being put in jail and in turn, losing Elizabeth. Someone had to pay for their separation and the pain it caused. I also wondered if Bella and Charlie were okay after Edwards arrest? Can't imagine he could turn a blind eye to the murder of a cop, especially since he smelled the evidence on Edward. Charlie was such a hypocrite though, taking the house, asking for a boat, but judging the private jet and household staff. I just loved both E&B in this story. She was strong but soft with him, he was ruthless but a softy with her. I hate the stories where Bella forever won't spend a dime and Edward becomes a pussy to the world. And thank you for the house full of kids! I love that he caved and found love in their children. That was too sad when he was arrested. Leave it to head in the sand Alice to scream about the damn party. Can't wait to read more from you!
| PaulaPr chapter 42 . 12/21/2013
Amazing! I almost cried when Edward was arrested :'(
Completely worth reading it! Bella was such a good wife and mother, It would have been great some outtakes about family holidays or vacations for edward and bella. How much time did edward stay in jail?
| LesleyLunaCullen chapter 32 . 12/21/2013
One thing. ..loving this story! I miss lemons but I digress. The language thing. To be truly bilingual, Edwards idea is ideal. The kids would naturally hear English because they would hear the language around them daily but, if B&E did make the effort to speak Italian to them then they would truly learn 2 languages simultaneously. Any language teacher would agree that method would be the most effective form of learning&retention.
| 2mpix.com chapter 42 . 12/10/2013
Both of these stories have consumed me!
| hippymehippyyou chapter 42 . 12/2/2013
Hey can you write more and maby bella can be prego in the epologe please
| heartstrings13 chapter 42 . 11/27/2013
Just wonderful... I was soo intrigued with the story that after reading 'There will be blood' I had to complete reading this story and now Im not satisfied I want more of them. Just too good to let go. I really dont have enough adjectives to tell you how much I loved these two stories. Truly splendid work. I completed them in 3 days. WOW!
| jus2read chapter 42 . 11/22/2013
LOVE LOVE LOV Seriously wow! I love how the first ended with Bella going prison and this one with Edward! Kept an unexpected theme through out! One of the best i've ever read- and i've read loads :D
| kalizivis chapter 42 . 11/22/2013
Ah so sad it is over...but what a story. Definitely one of my favorites!