Reviews for Beneath the Surface
dauntlessofthesea chapter 1 . 8/28
*hysterically laughing* :)
Guest chapter 1 . 8/16
Great fic. Love the last line.
TimeyWimeyBadWolf chapter 1 . 6/14
Lol. That last line...too good...
Triscribe chapter 1 . 4/19
Oh goodness, that last line-! xD
WriterGreenReads chapter 1 . 4/10
So, yes. Freya is awesome.
AND THE ENDING PFFF IS AMAZING.
OogaBooga1234 chapter 1 . 1/14
An this story tickled my humour perfectly x)
ThatFriendNextDoor chapter 1 . 11/22/2015
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA OH! HOW CAN ONE PERSON MAKE ME LAUGH FOR FOUR STRAIGHT ONE-SHOTS IN A ROW?! AMAZING!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/21/2015
This is an absolutely BRILLIANT ending. "Merlin," Arthur said, and paused, lost for words, before saying, "She is so far out of your league, it isn't even funny."
Grac3 chapter 1 . 8/18/2015
Very funny last line. I liked how you portrayed Freya in this.
Tarlockean-and-Proud chapter 1 . 1/25/2015
Well Arthur, Merlin just has that charm.
MoonlightMystery13.3 chapter 1 . 1/12/2015
So, uh, hi. The first paragraph inspired me to rewrite one of my childhood favorite poems into a Merlin poem, and I'm asking my favorite authors to preview it for me. Here you go, and I can't wait to hear you opinion. (This is from Arthur's POV, by the way.)
I Chased Some Bandits Through the Woods by MM13.3
Original by Jack Prelutsky
I chased some bandits through the woods, haranguing them all day.
"I'll catch you soon!" I taunted. "You can never get away.
There's no escaping me, my friends." I confidently cried.
"You might as well just stop running, there is nowhere you can hide."
"I think that I will simply lop your heads off with my sword."
The bandit leader stopped and whirled about, and ominously roared.
"You'd better think again," he shouted and glared into my eyes.
"In case you haven't noticed, my company's a dozen times your size.
It's evident that my men would prevail if we should ever fight, we're quite accomplished with our swords and would let our arrows take flight."
I thought about the bandits' words, and couldn't disagree-
I chased some bandits through the woods, and now they're chasing me.

What do you think? Is it good enough to bother publishing?
Can't wait to hear from you,
MM13.3
thebondgirl chapter 1 . 12/27/2014
Awesomeness personified. Seriously. :D
Guest chapter 1 . 12/24/2014
That last line though! So funny :) of all the things he could have chosen to say at that moment
Garland chapter 1 . 10/5/2014
Hahahaha That last statement though XD
guardianofdragonlore chapter 1 . 10/4/2014
Freya is so NOT out of his league. Really.
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