|Reviews for Hospital Visits|
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/8/2014
This is a D'arviting brilliant story! Can't wait for more!
| kazoquel4 chapter 2 . 9/6/2012
OI! Keep going! This is really good, don't stop now!
| tech-17 chapter 2 . 11/28/2011
why you no finish?
| IDreamOfDistantSeas chapter 2 . 9/21/2011
This is a really well written story and I hope that you write more soon. THe characters are very much in character.
| ArtyIsMine chapter 2 . 6/28/2011
This is an awesome story! Its really amazing! UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE! Oh, and will there be A/H?
| RandomstalkerNOWWITHausername chapter 2 . 6/15/2011
Good, good! Please continue! You portray them so Out of Character, yet so In character at the same time, Bravo! Fear my Irregular capitalization! And overuse of Exclamation marks!
| Buddhahead chapter 2 . 3/21/2011
I love this story! I've been planning to write my own Atlantis Complex fic too : )
| Beckett Simpleton chapter 2 . 3/15/2011
Last line sounded slightly unfinished, but all in all very touching. ;)
| Bellephont17 chapter 2 . 3/15/2011
Very very very good. I can't find anything wrong with it :) I am going to add this to favorites. Please update very soon!
| Bellephont17 chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
This is wonderful. It is refreshing to read a fanfic that portrays them as only a little more than best friends as opposed to weepy lovers. Thank you for this gift :)
| Frogster chapter 2 . 3/12/2011
Good job! You nailed the efficient Artemis when he was describing how he wanted to read up on everything to do with Atlantis.
I have my own theory of why Artemis can still feel Orion-I think his own feelings for Holly are starting to surface, and he just thinks it's Orion.
| Ash uh ley chapter 2 . 3/9/2011
Wow, that's a lot to happen in one day. It's very interesting though. Good job.
| Wrothmonk chapter 2 . 3/9/2011
very good. added to favorites and alerted
| YLCJET chapter 2 . 3/9/2011
This is really great. you're awesome at writing sick Artemis 8)
| mabh chapter 1 . 3/9/2011
Usually FanFiction is almost embarrassingly cheesy and badly written, but this was actually so good, I really enjoyed it! Fair play to you, and were I not from recession-stricken Ireland, I would definitely donate to your website. Good luck and I hope you continue writing 'cause you definitely have a gift!