Reviews for Hospital Visits
Guest chapter 2 . 7/8/2014
This is a D'arviting brilliant story! Can't wait for more!
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kazoquel4 chapter 2 . 9/6/2012
OI! Keep going! This is really good, don't stop now!
tech-17 chapter 2 . 11/28/2011
why you no finish?
IDreamOfDistantSeas chapter 2 . 9/21/2011
This is a really well written story and I hope that you write more soon. THe characters are very much in character.
ArtyIsMine chapter 2 . 6/28/2011
This is an awesome story! Its really amazing! UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE! Oh, and will there be A/H?
RandomstalkerNOWWITHausername chapter 2 . 6/15/2011
Good, good! Please continue! You portray them so Out of Character, yet so In character at the same time, Bravo! Fear my Irregular capitalization! And overuse of Exclamation marks!
Buddhahead chapter 2 . 3/21/2011
I love this story! I've been planning to write my own Atlantis Complex fic too : )
Beckett Simpleton chapter 2 . 3/15/2011
Last line sounded slightly unfinished, but all in all very touching. ;)
Bellephont17 chapter 2 . 3/15/2011
Very very very good. I can't find anything wrong with it :) I am going to add this to favorites. Please update very soon!
Bellephont17 chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
This is wonderful. It is refreshing to read a fanfic that portrays them as only a little more than best friends as opposed to weepy lovers. Thank you for this gift :)
Frogster chapter 2 . 3/12/2011
Good job! You nailed the efficient Artemis when he was describing how he wanted to read up on everything to do with Atlantis.

I have my own theory of why Artemis can still feel Orion-I think his own feelings for Holly are starting to surface, and he just thinks it's Orion.

Update soon!
PutnamBrettnLear chapter 2 . 3/9/2011
Wow, that's a lot to happen in one day. It's very interesting though. Good job.
Wrothmonk chapter 2 . 3/9/2011
very good. added to favorites and alerted
IantosStopwatch chapter 2 . 3/9/2011
This is really great. you're awesome at writing sick Artemis 8)
mabh chapter 1 . 3/9/2011
Usually FanFiction is almost embarrassingly cheesy and badly written, but this was actually so good, I really enjoyed it! Fair play to you, and were I not from recession-stricken Ireland, I would definitely donate to your website. Good luck and I hope you continue writing 'cause you definitely have a gift!

:)
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