Reviews for Lollipop
LunarNix chapter 1 . 4/3
This story was so cute!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/24/2014
It was so cute and awesome and I love it so much! They bare so cute together and I thought that I will not say anything like this because I thought those two would not look cute together but they do and it is just so cute! Love it! :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)
Allie Ravenwood chapter 1 . 9/23/2014
That was good! Don't delete it!
Cat chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
*fangirl squeal* cute! Awesome job Nya!
Graffiti-Kami chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
Ah, reading about hound people in love makes me feel like a perv... Oh well.
Loke Valentino chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
good enough for me
Aoi chapter 1 . 12/10/2012 sweet (ʃƪ)

Love ur fanfics..

Ganbatte nee...(ง'̀'́)ง to make a good fanfics.

I love seme natsu n uke gray...*kyaaaa...
DreamscomeTRUEEE chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
cuuuuuuuuuuute. but isnt mirajane around their age? :)
yukinome23 chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
please continue!
azab chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
i loved it a lot :)
Lucifer98 chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
Hahah I loved how you portrayed Gray as the Uke and the shy, vulnerable one xD! 3 Its a ncie story but the back part when Natsu was talking to Mirajane about thanking her for her support and telling her he was the seme was abit out of character :X Hahah other than that it was hot and sweet ;) Nice writing !
Delza chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
That was so cute I loved it.
mangaEATER-chan chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
You should definetly write the sequel (or a second chapter) where they get home and Natsu puts his lollipop licking skills to good use on Gray after practicing on that candy.



Fabuolous job
Fullbusterrulesmyheart chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
well i know there isn't any sense in reviewing a story so old but still i wanted to do so, so here i am!

oh i love this story. gray is so cute and natsu won't leave a chance to make him blush!
Missingyes chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
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