Reviews for What Happens in the Apple Orchard
Guest chapter 1 . 3/16/2016
Fantastic work, beautifully written!
Andrea McClayton chapter 1 . 8/15/2014
Wow this one is beautiful.
howmanygymdrops chapter 1 . 3/17/2014
I l0ved this. it makes me wish for summer to come
Guest chapter 1 . 1/22/2014
So... This is Carlisle and Esme playing a "game"? Not actually them as humans who don't know each other, but as vampires who are...
lennoxinlove chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
OMG i love this! their so cute and playful!
SUbennusi chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
My favorite fan/fic about carlisle and esme! Excellent writer.
kreechers chapter 1 . 1/25/2012
Very nice. You have a great way of making things like this really hot but still refined somehow. I think because when it's Carlisle and Esme is never really is dirty sounding. The way you write them even in scenes like this is so perfect; and believable.
beetlesfan003 chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
Ive read this before i think i just realized i never review for it.

I love the unique way of your writing. I wish i could have the talent you do.
Bestsister2 chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
Love love loved it! Carlisle and Esme are the greatest )

and that poem was cute!
ISabelleII chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
That picture is AMAZING. I can't believe how much it actually looks like he's laying on top of her.

This story is a perfect match for it.
loveknowsnolimits chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
Wow I loved this! It was funny yet romantic at the same time. Well done!
bettetwinklebee chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
I saw this recc'd on another fan site and was curious about the title. I didn't know it was carlisleXesme until I read the authors notes but i was pleasantly surprised by how amazing your writing was! i couldn't stop reading it until the end, it kept me on the edge of my seat to find out what was going to happen to esme. your writing is poetic and dreamy! Just an all around great job on this!
steamenginelyndsay chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
Mmmmmmmmm...this is even more yummy than an actual apple. ;D
FLUFFEDOUT chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
make my muscles turned to mush!

BrandySwill chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
That. Was. So. Hot.
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