|Reviews for Line of Sight|
| MesuNeko chapter 2 . 3/3
That's really a shame that you did not update the next part of story... I really love it. At first it was like 'wow it's porn and nice one at that' and then thebsecond part was like 'WhaAaAatGhHhEEeEeFUuuUuCKk Itssoawsomeiwantmore' yup, just like that. I wanna more. Gimmie more.
| Giotto27 chapter 7 . 4/26/2016
omg! I am so loving the way the story progresses! This story is a work of art
| Felicine chapter 7 . 3/22/2016
Amazing! This whole story is amazing and and wrenching. Through this saga, I was crying and cheering... Ellen was such a sympathetic character, and so was Tyki...how wonderfully written! You should publish! Especially this chapter, I know Ellen is losing her baby, but I'm still hoping! Crying and wishing :)
| MnMsRoK chapter 7 . 2/11/2016
Poop, I forgot this wasn't completed. This is my second time reading this story, and I still love it :D
| Crimson cat angel chapter 7 . 1/2/2016
| sofie chapter 7 . 2/23/2015
Hun it has been 4 years please update
| Elvea Theb chapter 7 . 2/2/2015
I've been reading your stories and I really like this series. I'm completely addicted to the TykixEllen pairing thanks to you. I have a story started but it's been a while since I've updated. You've kind of inspired me to updated and maybe start a new story with some poker pair action ** lol. Anyway, I love your stories and I hope you do the last section of the 'What Lies Hidden' series that you called 'When the World Ends'
| rinpup14 chapter 5 . 1/28/2015
hope Cardinal dies
| random chapter 7 . 12/29/2014
"I promise it won't take me a year to post"
Hurry up! I wanna know how this story ends!
| NitemarWalker chapter 7 . 9/15/2014
I love this story so much
| aeva elementia chapter 7 . 9/7/2014
Ah, do consider continuing this. It's one of my favourites of all your Poker Pair fics.
If only to see more chapters like Chap 4 *wink wink*
| MisayaMikoto chapter 1 . 7/29/2014
Ok are u joking when is the next chapter coming out its been what 3 years
| MisayaMikoto chapter 7 . 7/15/2014
whens the next chapter comin out
| NitemarWalker chapter 5 . 5/19/2014
1 super awe on Tyki admitting his love for Ellen
2THAT BASTARD CARDINAL KILL HIM KILLLLL HIM how dare he do that to her
3oh how I wished to know her reaction to finding out what Eu te amo means
Love it please update
| NightHunterDeath chapter 7 . 4/9/2014
write! It was amazing! so please update!