|Reviews for Before The Second Show|
| kiwisrock chapter 4 . 11/24/2011
Yeah...angsty alright! Is it Paul drugging her up, hope not! A-hole!
Please help edward out! Let him figure out if he can or can't help her or more importantly if she can help herself!
Please update when you can, will be looking forward to it!
Thanks for your wonderful (albeit addictive) writing!
| kiwisrock chapter 3 . 11/24/2011
Bella...crying for something she's lost? Broken, definately!
Thanks that he fobbed Tanya off! But I suppose the wedding is still going ahead?
Thanks, I like all the elements of your story!
| kiwisrock chapter 2 . 11/24/2011
I love the way you write her! She has rules...but she has needs...and at least she's honest about those needs and wants and doesn't pass them up!
hotness personified it seems these two!
How will it end? Only you can do that huh!
| kiwisrock chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
See...I knew it, I knew that I'd love this story too!
Thanks so much! I love a desperately in love edward cause he is one hot lover that always gets to melt bella's cold heart which ain't her fault, it's just build up!
Thanks, gonna read more, I really love the way you write and I always love to read while listening to music! Thanks!
| accolafied chapter 4 . 6/4/2011
Lovely chapter! Hmmm, I think Jacob will come in soon? ;)
| The spicy angel chapter 4 . 5/29/2011
Hey, I'm Daianne and I'm your new reader. You definitely made me get curious about Bella's life story.
Hope you update soon.
| myhubbyissoedward chapter 4 . 5/18/2011
Wow love this story can't wait for more
| texbratt67 chapter 4 . 5/16/2011
Hope Edward can help Bella. Looking forward to reading more
| kavelf chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
Great start. Thanks for the story.
| whereiselvis chapter 4 . 5/16/2011
Wow, so Paul is a her band-mate and dealer?
| whereiselvis chapter 3 . 5/16/2011
Guess—she lost Jacob and their child somehow...
| whereiselvis chapter 2 . 5/16/2011
I am really diggin' this!
| whereiselvis chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
Great intro; can't wait to see where this goes!
| Verosmee Cullen chapter 4 . 5/15/2011
daaaammmn! what the fuck was Paul doing there? owww I really ... ugh I dunno what to say... she is fucked and the poor fool, I mean Ed, it's getting in the middle, when she's fine I love her really, but then she get wasted and do shit and and... I'm mad at her! tough I really love Eddie he's confuse yeah, but in Bella' s words he's too sweet and sexy :D owws srly I can't wait for the next chapter... I dunno but I surely think Edward it's gonna give her a piece of his mind. lol I love jealous Ed! XD
P.S I truly deeply love your angsty mind!
| Jubbababy chapter 4 . 5/15/2011
drama! love it!