Reviews for Before The Second Show
Verosmee Cullen chapter 4 . 5/15/2011
daaaammmn! what the fuck was Paul doing there? owww I really ... ugh I dunno what to say... she is fucked and the poor fool, I mean Ed, it's getting in the middle, when she's fine I love her really, but then she get wasted and do shit and and... I'm mad at her! tough I really love Eddie he's confuse yeah, but in Bella' s words he's too sweet and sexy :D owws srly I can't wait for the next chapter... I dunno but I surely think Edward it's gonna give her a piece of his mind. lol I love jealous Ed! XD

P.S I truly deeply love your angsty mind!
Jubbababy chapter 4 . 5/15/2011
drama! love it!
Lulabell75 chapter 4 . 5/15/2011
Hmm, a little more about Bella. Can't wait until the next one

Lula
kezcullen chapter 4 . 5/15/2011
i think you have created a bella it is easy to hate. most authors try to make her apealing but you are not even bothering.

hence, the great mystery if they are human, why does edward want her (other than it is canon)?

fucked if i know.
pnkats chapter 4 . 5/15/2011
Great chapter. I think she needs to stay the he'll away from Paul. Please don't let her have slept with him.
ThroughTheAshes chapter 4 . 5/15/2011
Getting interesting know. Wonder why Paul was there? Really good, update soon! :)
AngelicAmanda chapter 4 . 5/15/2011
Good Chapter...
Dayjolie80 chapter 4 . 5/15/2011
hey i love this story!i love your Bella though your two timing Edward is starting to piss me off a little. I want to continue reading it but is Bella having sex with paul or any other guy?i need to know before i put it in my alerts!
2Music2 chapter 3 . 5/4/2011
omggggggggg this is too good!Loved it once again! hope you update soon I can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve! :) xoxo
2Music2 chapter 2 . 5/4/2011
I actaully like this story so far, I am so used to the shy & hurt Bella its interesting to read about this fietsy Bella. That last foreshadowing sentence got me scareddddd! ahhh love it! xoxoxo
2Music2 chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
WOW! Just wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! This chapter is amazing and so is your writing! If you want to put angst then put a shitload because I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE angst and a happy ending! xoxo
Lulabell75 chapter 3 . 4/18/2011
Yeah, very curious about Little J and Big J. Can't wait for the next one!

Lula
Lulabell75 chapter 2 . 4/18/2011
Ugh, that last line is killing me!

Lula
Lulabell75 chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
Wow, that was intense. Can't wait to get caught up and learn this Bella and Edward.

Lula
Savannah Lakes chapter 3 . 4/14/2011
LOVE IT :)
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