Reviews for Possession
BigT1587 chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
A nearly perfect one shot. You did the right thing with this story. A less confident writer would have taken the safe route and ended it with a sex scene. You stopped it at just the right point. I personally would have liked to see it more open ended;with leaving the readers guessing whether or not Jayne would keep the appointment. But that's just me. You've got writers privilege,so you can end it any way you want. Anyway, again,nearly perfect.
ForbalaTheGreen chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
I like this fic, and I love how the narrative is in Jayne's voice :)
Gotham Siren chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
This was very enjoyable!

River always knows how to get under Jayne's skin!

Great work.

*TCandBTVSluver*
Dherea chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
What a prize! Nice to know Jayne did not expect any reward...but now that he has seen it...he wants to take possession. Like how Jayne now feels his "girls" are useless to him now that he has seen River.

Good job! Great one-shot.
The Frisky Firelily chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
What a wonderful, beautifully written story. I think that it was really spot on as far as Jayne's character goes, not overly sentimental but nonetheless perfect. Seriously, excellent, superb work :)