|Reviews for Echoes|
| ady71 chapter 17 . 5/14
Updated 2017 PLEASE!
| ady71 chapter 17 . 12/27/2016
Updated 2016 please!
| ady71 chapter 17 . 9/19/2016
| ady71 chapter 17 . 6/22/2016
| Can't make a name chapter 17 . 4/26/2016
So nicely written. You are drawn into their emotions and the baggage they carry. I hope there is more out there to read. If not please continue to write.
| Can't make a name chapter 10 . 4/23/2016
Julie's conversion story is so sad, frightening ... so well written. You are emotionally drawn into it
| Can't make a name chapter 8 . 4/23/2016
WOW! You really feel for Julie. So well written. So much passion. I wrote something recently, but it is nothing like this.
You are doing a real great job
| Can't make a name chapter 7 . 4/23/2016
I loved reading Mikes dream about him and Sean. So well written. Enjoyed it there were details that seemed so right.
| Can't make a name chapter 5 . 4/22/2016
Rediscovering what happened in the scenes ... you have done a great job
| Can't make a name chapter 3 . 4/22/2016
This is really good so far. Darn must go to work now... can't wait to read the rest
| Elislin chapter 17 . 8/1/2013
Love it! Please continue posting more.
| Tamie Kwist chapter 17 . 8/1/2013
I love how you entertwined Julie's thoughts of her conversion process and what Diana tried to make her believe Donovan did to her. The ability to feel Julie and Donovan's inner turmoil and feelings for one another really makes this scene pop and brings it to life. You did a wonderful job with it.
| Tamie Kwist chapter 16 . 7/31/2013
That was a positively beautiful non-love scene. Love how you showed Julie's fear, emotion and trying to separate her nightmares from reality. That you had to rebuild her trust for Donovan and showed his cautiousness. And I always wondered how they ended up in the same train car together. And how they shared intimate moments without being interrupted.
| Tamie Kwist chapter 15 . 7/31/2013
Hmm I just about fell off my chair with laughter over this line... "There goes 'Mr. Friendly' and his big buddy, the teddy bear." Lol. I love this introduction of Ham and Chris to Julie. But on people, especially men (even though they were friends before) walking up to and hugging her, I thought maybe she would flinch or something... show fear... some after-conversion effect. Just a thought.
Reading every scene in this chapter is a treat as its been a while since I've watched V The Final Battle, and the mention of Ruby's death and Ham and Chris reaction was a delightful surprise.
You know and portray each character very well. I'm lovin' it.
| Tamie Kwist chapter 14 . 7/31/2013
I just love this chapter. I like your writing from Maggie's POV especially. And I like how you step back and approach Julie's scene from the outsider looking in... staring with "This is how it feels to be her right now." Your story is the best "fill in the blanks and in between scenes"s story on V I've read. I also really feel Donovan's character the way he remembers what Ham said to him in regards to Julie and how he's responding to it in his mind. Kudos.