|Reviews for The Gum Whisperer|
| hismysticmuse chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
This is the type of story that just makes you smile the whole time reading it. . I love it.
| Fiyaaa chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
This story is so unique and brilliant!
Thank you for sharing this x
| chyygirl67 chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
I loved it!
| PurpleBrina17 chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
Asses so sweet! Loved it
| FrustratedLawStudent chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
I love the story - characters are alive and real, plot interesting and the gums? Sweet, fresh and simply briliant, though I don't know half of them. Amazing! :)
| HollettLA chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
Now that we've announced the winners, I get to leave reviews. YAY! Loved your story and I think you did a beautiful job with fully realized characterizations and compelling dialogue. When she wasn't at her stand near the end, I was practically beside myself. Wonderful story, bb and I look forward to reading more of your work. We have another contest coming up soon and would love for you to enter.
| twilightmom1 chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
Awe loved it
| Jimmerjammer chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
| DaniWithGreenEyes chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
that was amazing! i loved it
i really want someone to tell me what gum i am now hahaha
ill never look a gum the same way
| HaylesHayles chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
that was really sweet :). i don't get why you M-rated it. but i liked it anyways!
| FrenchKatie chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
Great story! Love the airplanes between flights! A great way to transition in time. Nicely done with a build up even with no lemons...but they are yet to cum! Pun intended. Love the gum focus...very clever.
| parat chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
Super sweet, loved this :)
| MumblingSleeper chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
I love this line "I had to restrain myself from face-palming over my own idiocy". So perfect. I've gotta say, I haven't been a gum person since I was young (there was a sleeping with gum equals haircut incident) but now I'm curious what I'd be.
| Lovelybrutal chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
Wow, this was really great. The dialogue was believable, the characters felt real. The writing was polished and had a great, easy flow. i was sucked in from the first few lines. i would actually love to see more of this. Wonderful job, i really enjoyed it!
Except that now you've made me crave gum. Ice Breakers Bubble Breeze, to be specific.
| smallvilleandtwilightfan chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
I LOVED this story it was so sweet x]