Reviews for Midwinter's Night Tête à tête |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love the atmosphere first of all and your premise is a good one too: that sleeping with question the girls asked. I like Ichigo's reaction too, very very like him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well.. This is amazing really.. ;) nice story.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() cute but ichigo didnt realy tell her what it ment |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, dose he ever tell her that "sleep with" means "have sex with"? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This has got to be one of my favorite ichiruki- no, one of my favorite fanfics of all time. You wrote their relationship perfectly; you got the intimacy across, without it being "lovey", and I think it was the best way to illustrate their relationship- closer than friends, but not exactly lovers. It was so easy to imagine this happening, and I wouldn't be surprised if they actually did sleep together during winter nights. It's nice to see in this aspect of their lives where they aren't arguing, and just enjoying eachothers' company. AND you put the perfect amount of teasing/ getting along, which kept them (I'm going to freely use his word, though I can't really) completely in-character. I personally like the ichiruki relationship this way-the way it was in the manga: with their casual-understanding-and-somewhat-romantic interactions! Whew. My Longest. Review. Ever. But it was worth it. I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS! one last thing- Can I draw fanart of this? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good fanfic, but asking for reviews but not flames works as reverse psychology. You must do battle head-on! D: Good usage of sensory details. My brain is currently at 25% capacity at the moment, however, so I am quite clueless on what to critique you on. You had a wonderful blend of details and dialogue, enough so that it wasn't just the dreaded "MUSHROOM FORMAT OF DOOM". Also, I have to praise you on a wonderful summary. Your fanfics are quite inspiring. Prepare to dodge a Flare Blitz from a Flareon! I mean, have a nice day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i think i love this piece... it's cute, simple, and sweet... make more of this type... ganbatte! |
![]() ![]() ![]() so cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg, beautiful fanfic! *-* I loved the way you explained the 'sleep with' (Ichigo's cute!) and their relationship, caparing with Ichigo and Tatsuki and Rukia and Renji. it's so unique like you described! *o* awesome fic, congrats! (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() you've got the smartest way of writing the sweetest of things good job, looking forward for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW can't believe you posted this...:) ME LIKE IT :) |
![]() ![]() that was pretty good. to bad only one chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw that was really sweet! They're subject matter made me smile and they're just so in character :) Keep it up! |