Reviews for Buried
Momcat chapter 27 . 9/17/2014
Hey my friend, it was a great story and I cannot wait to read the other two you mentioned before.. One thing, I was slightly disappointed not to read any Sarah scenes after she was mentioned at the beginning.. I also expected to see Tim's parents after such a difficult ordeal.. But, hey, since this is your fanfic, your imagination can take you wherever you want, right ? Loved it !
Momcat chapter 23 . 9/17/2014
Oh my dear I'm sorry you have a sensitive stomach.. I have the same problem too, not to mention my sensitive bowels too ! And I get sinusitis all the time ! Yuck ! Back to your story, how come you never mentioned Sarah after what happened to McGee ? I mean, you mentioned her at the beginning when he supposedly had a dinner appointment with her, then nothing else.. I hope that you didn't forget her..
Momcat chapter 19 . 9/16/2014
Oh I'm so sorry to hear about your dad's death, my friend.. It may be a little late now, since it is 2014 now, but you have my sympathies… I also spent many weeks in my mom's hospital rooms ( she was hospitalized several times) before loosing her to cancer, so I completely understand what you went through… Take care...
Momcat chapter 17 . 9/16/2014
Oh and I forgot to remind that I'm not a McAbby fan, I-like most people-don't think that they will be a good couple, at least not until Abby changes some of her behavior...
Momcat chapter 17 . 9/16/2014
This may be a short chapter, but it was surely a dense one ! Hopefully this blast-off will push the others to persuade Tim to get real professional help.. Will he ? Will he ?(LOL) Hugs from France..
Momcat chapter 16 . 9/16/2014
Hey, my "twisted in a good way" friend, I like that the others realize that something is wrong with McGee.. I hope to find that they will be able to help him in time.. Take care...
Momcat chapter 15 . 9/16/2014
Well, you certainly wrote an Abby kind and nice… I must say that Abby-at least the Abby of the show-is not necessarily my favorite character…She can be nice sometimes but most of the time I see her like a spoiled child-mostly by Gibbs, especially when it comes to McGee.. She can be nice and careful when it suits her, but I hate the way she mistreats him sometimes, like in Tog Tags or Bloodbath… And I know from the fanfics that I'm not the only one… She keeps belittling, mocking him and his work or about his insecurities, flirts with others in front of him, then mistreats him when he shows interest in other women… She behaves very unstably...
Momcat chapter 9 . 9/16/2014
Tell your sister that she is wrong… Hey, what about fastening her to the armchair while the show is on the TV ? Just kidding ! But it's been 3 years since you completed this story so I hope that she saw the light LOL !
Momcat chapter 8 . 9/16/2014
Hey, thank you for the tip.. I'll read them as soon as I finish this one.. By the way, despite the fact that McGee, my favorite character, is suffering, I love your story coz it's good to see the team show concern towards Tim, since on the series they barely acknowledge him...
Momcat chapter 6 . 9/16/2014
Hey, TwistedRocketPower, did anyone tell you that you're as twisted as your name ? But good twisted, not bad LOL… This story reminds me of an episode of CIS-Las Vegas where Nick was being buried alive with a camera so he could communicate with the team ( if I remember right it was towards the end of season 5).. But they didn't show the PTSD he surely must went through...
Momcat chapter 1 . 9/16/2014
Wow, that was a hot start ! I cannot wait to read the rest… Thankfully we're in 2014 and the story is complete, so I don't have to worry about the risk of being left in a cliffhanger !
Brinohms chapter 16 . 1/8/2014
You should use the correct form. Respect our language. Just because "everybody does it" does not mean it is acceptable. And by the way, if Tim "lied" down, he told a falsehood. He "lay" down. Learn your principle parts of irregular verbs.
mibel chapter 27 . 6/28/2012
Such a great story!
gemstarlet chapter 9 . 6/8/2012
Awesome story! I read this story about a year ago, then today I watched an episode of CSI where Stokes was buried in a box and the team could only watch him from a live feed. The only thing that came to mind was they copied it off your story! :))
Guest chapter 27 . 10/24/2011
Great story! :D i loved it!
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