|Reviews for Whispers in the Dark|
| Nightshade's sydneylover150 chapter 10 . 2/28/2012
Still somewhat his fault though! Gotta love Sev!
By the way, is Lily attempting to spoil Harry? Doesn't she realize that he is too used to doing whatever he pleases? I cannot wait to see what happens when he does do his homework and if it is substandard. Or what will happen when he finds out they are going back to Spinner's End.
| MetamorphmagusLupin chapter 10 . 2/28/2012
SO good. Poor Harry. He was just so pent up. He HAD to get out. I probably would have done the same thing... Great chapter. I eagerly await the next one.
| Gazing at Castles in the Sky chapter 10 . 2/28/2012
YAYYYY new chapter!
i Loved it! the fight, the bargain, Harry. everything. Perfection
| Jlbrew85 chapter 9 . 2/12/2012
Reviewed this story over on P&S, but decided to do it again here. I really, really LIKE this story. Please, update soon.
| yogibears chapter 9 . 2/9/2012
this is really good! thanks for sharing!
| librarywitch chapter 9 . 2/5/2012
This came highly recogmended of all places on a Sirius group! I can see why. This is shaping up to be a fantastic tale. I love your sense of character. Spot on. I can't wait to see where you go with this one!
| BelieveInTheHoundsOfJustice60 chapter 9 . 2/5/2012
I hope the next update comes soon.
| GeneralWildfire chapter 9 . 2/4/2012
So happy to see an update! I just wish I'd had time to read it sooner! Awesome new chapter!
| Moi chapter 9 . 2/2/2012
Wow, amazing story. I am really looking forward for more chapters. I've rarely, exceptionally rarely come across Severus/Lily stories where she comes back from the seemingly thought-dead, but was gone none the less against her own will for years. Yours is also very well written.
Hopefully see you soon,
| Random Flyer chapter 9 . 1/30/2012
I love you're story! I haven't read any quite like it. The idea is awesome! You're doing a great job of explaining some of what happened, but leaving most it a mystery for later. I love how you're working out the situation between Lily, Harry, and Snape. They all have their own problems, weaknesses, and issues so it makes for a very interesting story.
I am curious if you're going to bring Sirius into this. Now that Lily is back, all she has to do is tell them that Sirius wasn't their secret keeper and then at least Snape and Dumbledore would know Sirius was innocent. I don't know if that would get him out of Azkaban since they're keeping Lily a secret, but they would know at the very least.
I'm looking forward to how Remus will react and just the rest of the story as a whole! Update soon! I can't wait for the next chapter!
| corderbollie chapter 9 . 1/30/2012
Love this story, I love the direction you went with it and the plot ideas. Very well written. Can't wait for more!
| xCecilex chapter 9 . 1/29/2012
I just found this story, and I love it, but I just thought of something, and it did take me until now, but now that I've thought about it, it won't leave: where's Sirius? You mentioned Lily has seen the papers, so shouldn't she have seen the papers that Sirius was arrested for his betrayal of her and James and Lily would know he hadn't really betrayed them and can get him out of jail, since hello, he's innocent. But, yeah, other than that confusion, I think the story is absolutely brilliant, and I hope you update soon!
| wrappedinharry chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
Well, I certainly like this premise and am looking forward to reading what you have written so far (and then more, hopefully).
I agree with Harry when he sees the light and realises that his aunt really does think the woman is Lily. Petunia would recognise her sister, nobody would have known Lily better and despite her ageing 11 years and probably looking less than serene, I doubt Lily would have changed all that much. And I doubt even Petunia would have sent a vulnerable nearly 12 year old off with a complete stranger, uncaring of his fate. Also, she would know she would have to answer to DD if the woman was a complete stranger. And Petunia is afraid of DD and magic.
Obviously Lily is going to Severus, a person she still describes as a friend. Is canon unaltered? If so, she no longer thought of Severus as a friend. If she did not know for sure that Harry was dead, then she must not know the fates of Sirius and Lupin. Why would she not try to find one of them. She would have known where they lived before she and her family were rent asunder. And as Lily and the Marauders all belonged to the OOTP, I am sure Lily would know Severus was a DE.
I am interested to see how mother and son are going to get from Surrey to Manchester (or Birmingham perhaps) without magic, and, I presume, without money. Lily would, I suppose, be able to use Harry's wand once they are a fair distance from Privet Drive.
The start was interesting. Severus taking an old neighbour's welfare to heart is certainly an out-there scenario. Obviously, Severus is not going to be his canon-self in all aspects. The canon man is anti-Muggle and far from friendly, even with his fellow magical-folk.
It seems as though Lily is far from happy with DD. Why, I can't imagine as the Potters knew about he prophecy; that is why they were in hiding. I hope this is not going to be a DD-bashing story because I will not be able to keep reading if that is going to be the case.
There are lots of questions... how did Lily escape and how did she get to Surrey from where ever she was imprisoned? Why was Lily imprisoned? And why did DD not realise when he invoked the protective magic around Harry and #4 Privet Dve. IF she was still alive, then surely the protection that Lily gave Harry because of her death would have been non-existent and DD would not have been able to invoke the ancient magic. Just a thought.
I was a tad put-off with the obvious American flavour to the writing, eg, pavement would translate to footpath and crisps are chips. There are a few other examples, but I can't think of them at the moment. This however did little to detract me from enjoying the well-written beginning.
Onto chapter 2.
| DarkRavie chapter 9 . 1/26/2012
Another very good chapter. I look forward to reading what happens next in your fic.
| Sierra-A.W chapter 9 . 1/25/2012
I really enjoyed your story! I just read all 9 chapters tonight. I hope Lily does not leave Severus, and I hope that Severus starts being nicer to Harry. I hope that you update really soon! I am anxiously waiting to find out what happens next. Good job!