|Reviews for Whispers in the Dark|
| mythology1746 chapter 13 . 5/24/2013
I quite enjoyed this story, and I'm looking forward to seeing the next chapter! I love how Snape and Lily are interacting, though I can say the Harry having a learning deficiency is weird...
| Saint Snape chapter 13 . 5/24/2013
Lots of different things going on here. With the discovery of the house in Richmond I wonder if they will find out who and why Lily was being kept there. Is this Pyre person going to be a factor in this? Will Severus be able to help Lily get here magic back and help Harry? Severus has a full slate of things to do. I like how you made Severus not like cooking because most people do.
| Lon Wolfgood chapter 13 . 5/22/2013
Oooooh! So many mysteries! :O
Lovely interaction between Snape and Lily. ;D
Hahahaha! And, nice take on the Potionscooking cliche! :D
I don't tire of saying how much I love this story! :D *explodes from happiness*
| the DragonBard chapter 7 . 5/22/2013
Really, Harry's acting more like a seven year old than a twelve year old.
| randomflyer chapter 13 . 5/22/2013
Great chapter. You've got lots of things going on with the story. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it. Update soon!
| WolfKeeper989 chapter 13 . 5/22/2013
LOL... that ending! But good job!
| MetamorphmagusLupin chapter 13 . 5/22/2013
Haha. What might Snape know about imagination? I love that line. Such a Harry thing to think. Keep it up! Loving the new chapters!
| DarkRavie chapter 13 . 5/22/2013
Great chapter! I love this story and you are doing a fantastic job writing it. I look forward to reading what happens next.
| LoveSpock chapter 13 . 5/22/2013
Love the update. Good filler chapter. Will Snape let Harry cook? I'm looking forward to finding out more on how Lily lost her power and who kept her prisoner. Will the house elf be able to answer questions? Who is buried in Lilly's grave?
I thought it interesting that Harry questioned Snape's imagination. Good way to show a child's point of view. Based in previous chapters, I'm guessing that Harry has some form of dyslexia.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter with great anticipation.
| geetac chapter 13 . 5/22/2013
I like the chapter.
| Doll chapter 12 . 5/17/2013
this is really awesome! I'm so glad you kept writing.
| Random Flyer chapter 12 . 5/16/2013
Great chapter! It looks like Snape is on the right track and he and Harry aren't quite so hostile toward each other as they were. I think it helps Snape to have a mission or something on which to focus. I'm looking forward to Remus coming into the story. I wonder how he'll react to news about Sirius and if Sirius will even take part in this story. I really don't know how it's going to turn out so that's exciting.
Hope you update soon!
| Mother of Tears chapter 12 . 5/16/2013
This is a great, well-written story! I love the interaction between Snape and Lily and the way you are slowly letting Severus and Harry warm to each other. The mystery of what really happened to Lily is compelling too. And who is buried in Lily's tomb?
Can't wait for more!
| Lon Wolfgood chapter 12 . 5/15/2013
Oh, gods, this is awesome! :D
Poor old woman... Unless... they're all ghosts, and she ends up being right, after all! ;P
I love love LOVE LOVE LOVEEE this story. I wish I could enslave you so you'd write only this story forever and ever.
| Ellie chapter 12 . 5/15/2013
It's amazing, your writing. When can you update again (even though you updated today before six o clock my time)?