|Reviews for Love of my Life|
| Windy Hope chapter 1 . 4/20
Could be longer and needs better structure
| Take-me-away-to-paradise chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
Well I thought your poem seemed very emotional, and a pretty good begining. But the fact is, I don't see where it goes into Hadashi De Bara Wo Fume. So if you could ad some elements from the manga in the next chapter, and the reasons why the burning pain in the chest -I assume the pain is from Sumi?- that would be best.
Anyway, I do hope you continue, Hadashi De Wo Fume needs more fanfictions.
| iwillbefearless chapter 1 . 3/2/2011