Reviews for Mate
To Be Helpful chapter 1 . 6/27
Greetings!

Know that it has been 7 years since you posted this. You may have learned this since then: stick with only one point of view. If you want to portray two or more different point of view, go third person. The way you switch so often makes it difficult to know who is who.

Also, be constant with your tense. This is harder to accomplish when jumping point of views.

:)
Thanatophobia kills chapter 1 . 10/28/2016
this is kinda dark. but I like it
Drarry Lover chapter 1 . 6/28/2016
Aww this was a pleasure to read. Now Draco will have no more pain. I'm glad they found each other. Great story! Thanks for sharing.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/30/2016
Great story! I love submissive Draco! Thank you. xxx
AliceCullen3 chapter 1 . 2/20/2016
LOVE IT!
SakuraLuck chapter 1 . 11/21/2015
damn what happens next?
ncbexie25 chapter 1 . 5/11/2015
Loved it ; that was really sweet
sugarbabies chapter 1 . 3/29/2015
nice one thanks
kirsty21 chapter 1 . 3/29/2015
cool
DRARRYLOVR4EVERINMYHEART chapter 1 . 1/11/2015
AMAZING JOB I LOVE IT!1
godess bubbles chapter 1 . 5/30/2014
I love those two!
KrixLight chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
a warning before changing perspective would be very nice. other than that, well done. is there a sequel? how their bond will grow/change? how others would react to their relationship?
shunned-one chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
Very nice. And its so sweet.
Yaoi-for-the-win chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
I loved the story. I think it was a good idea to do Harry and Draco's point of view, but it was kind of confusing too. I liked the gentle Harry. And Draco yelling that Harry is his mate in the end was perfect! Great job! I loved how Draco was realizing he was in love with Harry during when they were making love. Cute!
Dragon.Lady.Day chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
Holy potato on a stick! In all honesty, one of the best drarry Veela fics I' 've ever had the pleasure to read. A few minor grammar and punctuation errors, all easily fixed, but all in all, simply fantastic. :)
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