|Reviews for A Thiever, Stealing Time|
| Poolitzer chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
I really love this story, I'm glad I had the time to read it. The storyline is really unique and I love the way Momo and Toushirou are speaking to each other. At first, I didn't know it was just a one-shot and I expected at least a few other chapters but after reading it for the fourth time. I'm in love with this story. I honestly don't know why but I'm addicted ;-)
Just a little critic: Your sentence structure is a bit monotonous. After reading it for the fourth time I just noticed it, because you begin many sentences with "he..." oder "she...".
I'm looking forward to your new stories :D