|Reviews for Captive|
| MisanthropicGoddess chapter 1 . 4/12
Well, that was interesting. I'd like to know what happens after, though. And the mark. I feel like there's more to the mark than Sasuke being a possessive ass. Could be an important aspect of a longer story. :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2014
I'd love to see a sequel
| seireidoragon chapter 1 . 2/15/2014
I loved this story! Great job!
| SharinganSora chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
Geez that's hot, haha the ending, loved it! A few grammar mistakes in places but other than that that was the most epic oneshot ever! You rock! xD
| SerenityKieraSilverwind chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
Even though this is a one shot it was a really good one.
| RaggingLightningWolf chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
awesome story love the chidori part later.
| Reader's Daughter chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
oh my gosh *blushes*
| kayeny chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
That was amazing!
I really enjoyed it x3
| Kativa-chan chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
So good! The ending was funny, too.
| Theguynextdoortoyou chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
hahaha! oh god that branding thing was cute. it reminded me of when in harld and kuma escape from Guantanamo bay when NPH goes to the whore house...
| noname00 chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
The fic was fantastic but the ending simply blew it away
| Sis chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
Hahahahahahaha i love the end!
| Alecksander92 chapter 1 . 3/8/2012
Brilliant oneshot! I haven't read anything on here in a while, so I decided to see if there was anything interesting up here and I have never been more glad in my life. You could come up with a multi-fic story from this (I'm sure) but the oneshot alone is brilliant. Just a few punctuation issues, but nothing writing-wise (and those can be easily fixed with the right beta). A brilliant story and as perfect way to gain new fans.
| M1th chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
Damn.. this was one really good one-shot. Really love Sasuke's possessiveness and branding of Naruto. Hah... bruising...lol
Such a shame there won't be more... :(
| SapphireFlaze chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
creative, very creative!