|Reviews for Takers: Story of Eminence|
| cje24576 chapter 1 . 10/8
I love this idea! I hated how they all died in the movie! However, I'm not trying to offend you or anything, but you seriously need to consider getting a beta reader. I'm seeing a whole lot of grammar, punctuation, & spelling errors. And they make the story really hard to read/ understand. Please get a beta reader. Again, this is not a flame & I'm not trying to offend.
| Rachel chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
| MizzTigg41695 chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
the story is great so far.
| HellRaiserPrincess chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
It's a gud start so far! gud job! :D