|Reviews for Naruto the White Fox|
| my 2 guys chapter 9 . 1/21
that was good keep the chapters coming
| fenixrojo36 chapter 9 . 9/22/2016
| john chapter 1 . 8/3/2016
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/30/2016
Finesh what you have started here O K !
| ijonk chapter 6 . 3/29/2016
Noo.. this is not naruto.. naruto is not evil.. naruto is forgive n forgot even get betrayed.. even get tortured
FUCK YOU! INCONSISTEND
fucking ruining naruto vs yammamoto figth become sappy
NARUTO BLUE EYES.. OTHER COLOR IS NOT NARUTO! CRY ME A RIVER
i tought he get over other opinion on him when he died.. but nooo! he must get sappy n think what other think about him
| Primus2021 chapter 3 . 1/7/2016
please add Hinata, Apacci, Mila Rose, and Sun-Sun
| Primus2021 chapter 1 . 1/6/2016
I think "Vizancard" sounds cool.
| hab chapter 9 . 9/19/2015
What was the point in even having that beginning if you weren't going to do anything with it. Story just never rose above that pointless depression.
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/29/2015
Do be careful with homophones for they sound the same but have different meanings
Mouth- it's on your face
Month- 12 of them that is divided to separate the year
Past- a tense that represents what happened
Passed- move in a specific direction
Be wary when you write in the English language for people can be harsh and the words can get very complicated. Try to get someone to help with your written English.
| Unnatural Reader chapter 8 . 12/17/2014
Holy fuck that was all epic. Awesome fight scenes, the thing with Nel was cool and the ending was quite humorous
| Unnatural Reader chapter 5 . 12/17/2014
The soul society arc is starting and boy did if start strong
| Unnatural Reader chapter 3 . 12/16/2014
Holy shit, things are about to get real
| Unnatural Reader chapter 1 . 12/16/2014
I really loved this when it first came out but never really reviewed... Hope you continue working on it
| SMH chapter 8 . 12/10/2014
It was good at the beginning but after chapter 4 it's slowly started to get worst. With Naruto being so over powered that all conflict seemed pointless. And why did he have so many types of cero they didn't seem to have any purpose other than making it sound different and majesty vasto lorde that was dumb because of the way you described how to become one there should've been others besides him. Since these high level vasto lorde meet and then have a free for all it sound like this ritual has happened before so there should be other hollows as strong or stronger than Naruto. While your grammar was bad it didn't stop me from reading but what almost did make me want to stop was the horrible humor you attempted to add that and the flirting which was also bad. You should have defined Naruto's abillties better. Why did he know something's he shouldn't have while being completely oblivious to other things that made no sense his knowledge of all over the place.
Lastly the hollow philosophies that you were writing made no sense over 90% of them are mindless monsters and then even in that 10% only some were good. But you were making them seem like the victims and shinigamis the bad guy but when they kill hollows with their zanpakuto they are actually purifying them which is a good thing. Hollows are not suppose occur naturally they happen when souls become corrupted. And hunger should not be a problem in SS because only people with high spiritual energy get hungry. The only real problem they should have is with the horrible living environment that normal souls have.
| The Fox Sage chapter 1 . 8/31/2014
How about calling his species void reapers