please write the next chapter soon

Shit fic.

interesting but the 1st person P.O.V is a turn off

So this fic is abandoned, and has no chance for continuation.

Sasukes way to OOC its kinda creepy

I like the idea behind the story naruto having the mystic eyes of death perception but please don't ruin it by bringing other tsukihime characters in or trying to narutoize the tsukihime story it will just ruin Magan no naruto

It's good:)

Poor Naruto who doesn't understand anything.

What is this state Naruto entered during this fight ?

Well a filler chapter.
Thanks for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter.
I first though that Aoko explanation of the lines were down right shitty. I mean you don't explain these line by you can see the future to a child.
But then she explained it much better to Naruto. These eyes is not something to fear but just another tool in Naruto's Pocket. A powerful and terrible one.

Anyway, keep up the good work.

hmm interesting as long as the re-write isn't a 1st person P.O.V fic i'll enjoy it as I've read ALOT of 1st person P.O.V fics since I read this one that have been self inserts that have turned me off of 1st person fics

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VERY annoying to read a first person P.O.V fic please re-write this in 3rd person P.O.V