|Reviews for Should've Been|
| Fandomsrule10 chapter 1 . 1/15/2015
I did all three! I did all three! I laughed and I squealed away!
| thestupidgenius1123 chapter 1 . 11/9/2014
Do you know how shocked I was to realize that this is the second time I've read this and only the first time I've reviewed? Gawd. Punch me Tiffany. I'm horrible.
You are incredible at fics like this. Fics where max and fang banter and exhibit their friendship through little actions and words PERFECTLY. I can see how close they are, and I revel in their special connection the entire time I'm laughing my ass off at how adorable they are. The banter just shows you how much fun they'll have as a married couple!
Your writing style is superb and on par in this one, tiff. I especially love the ending; somehow you manage to word things /just right/ so they impact the readers perfectly. I know for a fact that is one of your talents I have tried to mimic and no one does it like you! The way you put subtle things in there and leave it up to the reader to interpret it and figure it out is amazing. You do it with S&L all the time. (Sorry my review-spree on S&L was lame and cut short on like chapter 6; life has been crazy busy and I KNOW you understand that. I will continue!)
I am in love with this one shot, Tiffany! Always great reading cute little fax shots from you- even if I'm totally late the the party. :/
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/8/2014
I so did not see that coming!
| TheHandWeWereDealt chapter 1 . 7/29/2014
For a second I thought she was getting married to someone else...
| aly chapter 1 . 6/13/2014
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/25/2014
Are you going to update
| randomsheller1235 chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
Fellow Maximum Ride lover here, I read through a bunch of your stories and I can confidently say your the best I've read so far. And I have read a lot. A LOT. I love your characterization of Max, Fang, Iggy, and Nudge; I think they are spot on. Keep on writing stories for the sake of the fandom!
| ghostgirlheartfillia chapter 1 . 4/20/2014
Omg I love this story so much, I was laughing the entire time, and I literally gasped at the end! I was really funny and I love it!
| CharlieBoneFan chapter 1 . 4/4/2014
Yeah, Max and Fang forever. I love how Jeb shows up at the end too. I love it when he's part of the family.
| RoseSilver999 chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
Ohmygod I...this... my... ohmygod. That was so amazing. I was going to punch you in the beginning cuz you made if sound like she was marrying someone else. Then I was like, well maybe max runs offf with fang anyway... and then I got all sad cuz I was worried she didn't. I don't know why. I mean, fax all the way, right? And then they're gettig married anyway!
Okay I'm good. Sorry. I had to go fangirl squeal my lungs out.
I loved how you made it seem like it was going one way, but then it veered the direction you qanted it and now that you know what happens everythig before that makes more sense. You know? I don't, lol.
Okay I gotta go fanfic stalk you and find more awesome stories, catchya later. Sorry for any misspelled things, I'm writig on my stupid phone keyboard...
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/5/2013
I thought Max was getting married to somebody else!
| Jade chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
That was an awesome story and then at the end when you said that he was the groom amazing!
| RainbowReads chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
Oh my gosh! Haha too cute! "'At least mine sticks to one color! What's yours? Blondish-brown caramel with sun streak highlights and a hint of chocolate in it?'" So cute!
| CarrotTopsHateRed chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
That was SO cute! Fang was the groom? Figures. I actually thought there was someone else in the picture. Did a good job fooling me! (:
| Krystal Fyre chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
Wait... Max and fang are getting married?