love that new line in le prophecy

This is really really good.

Great so far i hope you continue this

I really love this story.

Can you please continue .
I think this is my favorite dark Harry ever. I like how Voldy isn't ooc. I love your writing style .

This story is really great, I hope you continue it some day!

There is an editorial discrepancy here. You say that Harry decided to trust his two friends with the knowledge of being Harry Potter "two months ago". However, they are 11, getting ready to start formal school, so this would be 4 years later. Unless you changed when school starts and did not mention it.

Otherwise, good story so far.

omg yeeeeesssss is this story still going?

Very eloquent and well-written, and it has the best original plotline i've seen in a fanfic for a very long time. Excellent Job!

UPDATE

no, I think you did good. not the sappy romance indeed, but more pragmatic serious one but it's good. sigh, i was looking forward to know what harry will do to the french champion. anyway thanks. love it

what will he do about the french I wonder?

oh come on, you already not careful from the start harry. what's with your subordinates messing up a lot

I hope sirius sided with harry, so maybe neutral

aww so magical adoption? no fun~ james wouldn't know he is harry then. I guess it's fine too