|Reviews for Smiles|
| thepkrmgc chapter 1 . 7/7
I like the style, its often forgotten how big a difference the kindness of one man can make
| OnceABlueMoon chapter 1 . 8/17/2016
| Jonin Neji Hyuga chapter 1 . 11/30/2015
A good and interesting read.
| Madame Minuit12 chapter 1 . 4/5/2015
aw that's so lovely!
| long live marshmallows chapter 1 . 3/24/2015
Ooohh this is... so good! It's a very likely scenario! I love he he hated Naruto in the beginning but later the kid ends up being his best customer. The ending with Kushina flashbacks was definitely my favourite part.
| Questionable Answers chapter 1 . 1/3/2015
Awe! So cute.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/21/2014
I teared up :'D it was so sweet. I love how u showed Naruto's similarities to Kushina and made Teuchi realise Naruto was her son.
| Taerisi chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
I really liked the emotions behind this piece! It was really touching. However, you made a pretty big grammatical error.
"It's" is a contracted form for 'it is'
"Its" is possessive.
Hope this helps!
| Ferm chapter 1 . 7/30/2014
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/25/2014
This was wonderful. It made me cry. Because nearly ten years ago, this was exactly how Naruto was - a cheerful friendly boy who beamed even if only Teuchi, Sandaime and Iruka-sensei saw him as a person.
The part about Teuchi seeing Kushina in Naruto was breathtakingly beautiful. And you're absolutely right - Teuchi is way underappreciated. Excellent premise, amazing writing style - a gem of a piece, and thanks so much for writing it!
Eagerly looking through the rest of your profile now. Thanks so much for sharing, and hope to see more from you! :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/11/2014
I loved this! I've long thought about how Teuchi had to have known a lot more about Naruto than he really let on! Brilliant! and Brava!
| PeinVPuppy chapter 1 . 3/13/2014
I loved this story I got teary eyed and awwwed at the sweet ending well done
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
Oh my... #amazed
Naruto had a lot similarity from Kushina...! :D
And Teuchi accept him...!
At first he's already professional! Because he accept Naruto as his customer when he still didn't really like him.
But now, he would be different!
| Miner603 chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
I love it, well done. You're right, as well, Teuchi gets no screen time and is incredibly neglected for it, as is his daughter, Ayame.
| shadowmarialove chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
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