Reviews for The Soul Mate
webpixie chapter 7 . 3/7/2011
well technically there isnt any weasley blood in harry since molly is only a weasley by marriage, so tech he would only be half siblings with them _ although moving it over to sirius would still be good, i usually wouldnt have an issue either way but you already set a precedent by saying that the evans line was squibs because of breeding too close so you cant use the 'magic makes it ok' excuse, heh.

nice story thus far by the way, looking forward to more.
kentrek1 chapter 7 . 3/7/2011
oh this is a great story so far. just one thing will harry learn more about his parents. and will someone catch up with the dursley?

apart from that this look to be a great story in the making.
jammies2000 chapter 7 . 3/6/2011
I too was thinking the blood adoption from Molly make it a bit icky. Why couldn't Snape or Albus have adopted him instead. I mean now he is going to have to go through the 'removal' of the adoption and then be adopted again... that will be painful I would think. Plus now the pain of being away from Charlie. I mean we already know that the Evans line is purblood but were squibs because of marrying to close together and then this deal with the blood adoption made it worse. I know you said it will be removed but why not just 'maybe' rewrite it where it isn't with Molly or that they don't do it at all. I can see some readers turning away without reading more of the story once the adoption by Molly was put in there. Plus why put Harry through all that pain of being adopted, removing it and then adopting again? Since Harry and Charlie are soul mates he should be able to stay at the Burrow without anyone saying he can't. He should be safe enough for now. Well maybe not with Scabbers living there.

Anyway I like the story though so thanks for posting look forward to reading more
angelsarah22 chapter 7 . 3/6/2011
Wtg with this story i love it. I am a big Charlie/Harry fan can't wait for the next chapters keep up the great writing
FRK921 chapter 7 . 3/6/2011
Really glad about the Siirus thing. I figured you had some plan to avoid having Charlie & Harry stay brothers! Can't wait for more!
FRK921 chapter 6 . 3/6/2011
FRK921 chapter 5 . 3/6/2011
Poor Harry, but Charlie will be in Scotland soon!
FRK921 chapter 4 . 3/6/2011
Charlie is so sweet.
FRK921 chapter 3 . 3/6/2011
Hmmm...shouldn't it technically be Prewett-Potter?
FRK921 chapter 2 . 3/6/2011
I like Sev too!
FRK921 chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
Awww...Charlie! xx
riiaofwind chapter 6 . 3/5/2011
Great story! i like how everybody is so protective for harry Cant wait to read more
serenityselena chapter 7 . 3/5/2011
awesome story ...

cant wait for Sirius to make an appearance ...

hope to read more soon _
Start.Again.Angel chapter 7 . 3/5/2011
Thanks for clearing it up 3 Can't wait to read your next chapter
Will.Hell.Minna.-Sophia Isobel chapter 7 . 3/5/2011
oh.. please do update soon though.. i'm very much interested on your story.. i wonder what will happen to Harry and Charlie? will Charlie be there to greet Harry? what will the other students think? sooooo many question.. and your the ONLY person who has the answers... haahahaha... _ cherio, mate.
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