|Reviews for The Soul Mate|
| Harriverse chapter 52 . 11/8/2012
You have all those pen names? How am I supposed to keep up with you? I do agree about some of the changes on , but I've been here so long that I'm reluctant to change. All my favorite authors are here and its so convenient to use.
| Harriverse chapter 48 . 11/8/2012
Ooooooh! Twinkling blue eyes? Is that who I think it is?
You planned that, right? Did he set them up to help get rid of them or to test Harry? Being who he is he would know all about the castle, if it is him that is.
| anon chapter 15 . 10/29/2012
It looks like you have some good ideas here, but there are some problems I have with the story. I feel like sometimes there's more 'tell' than 'show' if you know what I mean. I also find it strange that Harry is so open about speaking about his abuse, especially to Draco who he's never gotten along with. I would think that a sensitive subject like that would make a person more hesitant to share, feel ashamed, etc. That kind of abuse would probably make a person wary of trusting others. If you ever get a chance to rewrite, I might think of using more subtlety in these areas. Maybe I'm being overly critical, but I hope you take it as constructive criticism. I certainly don't mean it as a personal attack, and I appreciate the amount of work you've put into this. If you want some examples of good writing about abuse (in my humble opinion) Amy Lane has some great books.
| Harriverse chapter 30 . 10/26/2012
If you could almost kill Harry in a Quidditch match, you can certainly let a beater win the game!
| otaco chapter 53 . 10/23/2012
Please continue, this is so good. Thanks!
| shadowama chapter 53 . 10/20/2012
wow, read this one throughout all yesterday and finished it at 9:30 am ...guess that means that i really liked it. update soon but don't worry if you get writer's block, i can take my time with the other stories that you have written
| TLJ110166 chapter 45 . 10/19/2012
4 babies...2 girls and 2 boys. Kiara Regina for the Malfoy-Snape girl, and Kieran for the Lupin-Black boy. The Weasley's have a girl, Rachel Anne, and Harry and Charlie a boy. I can't think of a good name for that child.
| TLJ110166 chapter 41 . 10/19/2012
Have you tried babelfish?
| TLJ110166 chapter 33 . 10/19/2012
I never thought I'd say this, during this story, but, poor Albus(!). When will we find out who did it, how it was done, and why?
| TLJ110166 chapter 29 . 10/19/2012
Albus is really off his rocker, isn't he? BTW, mold doesn't have a u in it.
| TLJ110166 chapter 19 . 10/18/2012
Poor Draco! It's no wonder he fainted, with the number of shocks he's had, in a really short period of time.
| TLJ110166 chapter 18 . 10/18/2012
Succubus, or would it Incubus? I can't remember which is male, and which is female.
| Nayeli Clearwater chapter 45 . 10/16/2012
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