Reviews for Magical Jutsu
Guest chapter 1 . 12/9/2014
the worst ive read in a long while. i cant sing so i dont try, maybe you shouldt the same for writing
Mugetsu16 chapter 1 . 2/13/2014
I read the first paragraph and it was so rushed and fake that I just lost interest. No development or flow whatsoever.
Guest chapter 3 . 2/12/2014
Now I wish to kill minato even more if she fought him it must have been when Naruto was still a young boy AND HE SHOULD HAVE FUCKEN TAKEN CARE OF HIS SON AND NOT BEEN MARRILY JAUNTING AROUND WITH THE FUCKTARD KNOWN AS NAGI
Epoli chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
Difficult To Follow Due To Multiple People Speaking In A Single Paragraph And Seems A Little Rushed. Great Concept. While I May Not Continue Reading It, I Wish You The Best Of Luck.
manticore-gurl071134 chapter 24 . 9/9/2013
lol. once again great extension
manticore-gurl071134 chapter 23 . 9/6/2013
this was an interesting extension. Does that mean it will all be?
theneutralite chapter 21 . 6/30/2013
this version of fate is a real dick
theneutralite chapter 20 . 6/30/2013
cute
theneutralite chapter 19 . 6/30/2013
evil f...s
theneutralite chapter 18 . 6/30/2013
interesting
theneutralite chapter 17 . 6/30/2013
wasnt fate just a pupet?
theneutralite chapter 13 . 6/29/2013
exelent, naruto deserves a family
theneutralite chapter 9 . 6/29/2013
very nice
theneutralite chapter 8 . 6/29/2013
oh mother fucker
theneutralite chapter 6 . 6/29/2013
hahahhaha
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