Reviews for Her Last Opportunity
elainefr chapter 1 . 12/5/2015
Dealing with loss is hard enough; add in not taking advantage of an opportunity when you were both susceptible is adding salt to the sad. Well written.
Miggyrow chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
Oh ! The end was heartbreaking. I got your point in this story. I could picture it happening. It was better paced than "Her last chance". I feel sorry for Jane also because Trent and her were like the two faces of the same coin, inseparable.
J. Francis Marion chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
Tragic, but not overdone. Nothing worse in life than regrets. I'm sorry about your friend.
Drea chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
I love your story. The part that really got to me was in the end when she was crying about tren'ts death and then I looked up at the top of my screen and saw the tittle of your story and I swear my heart broke just a little more.