Reviews for Empty Stomach
theunhappytwins chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
Oh my God, this is epic...
and if I had written this, every other line would be an Evil Food Eater Conchita shout-out, so no.
James Birdsong chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
Cute
Alex Warlorn chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
A little TOO vague in the second half.

That being said, nice look at things.
Ember A. Keelty chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
I think you pulled the stream-of-consciousness off quite well. Somehow it really feels like the sort of thing that would be in that creature's head, with just a slight shadow of humanity to make it all the more disturbing.
ZipCode chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
This was creepy but also awesome.
ShadowkittenMF chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
I like this. It is well written, and the "incorrect" structure of the text is in fact perfect and helps to convey the story as much as the words itself. I believe, canon or not, that you've done a brilliant job of crawling into a Witch's head, and taking the reader with you.