|Reviews for Mind Games|
| p3arce chapter 7 . 2/5
This is absolutely making a perfect sense to me! !
Enough said, it's damn way too perfect!
| thefearlesscherryblossom chapter 6 . 12/7/2013
Aw this was awesome! It was compelling and sexy but also sweet, and I actually really loved the romantic ending. Thanks for sharing this story!
| nira chapter 6 . 3/31/2013
love this fic. love it so so much. shocks.s this is just great. thank you so much for writing it. enjoyed reading it.
| nira chapter 3 . 3/31/2013
love this chapter and the reversal. shocks. felt excitement there despite the lack of it. this is just cool, wonderful. love this chapter. i wonder how things will turn up in the next ones :D
| backup2backup chapter 4 . 11/19/2012
i am fangirling so hard right now
| TezTra chapter 6 . 3/24/2012
Awww! That had to be the sweetest Shizaya ending ever written! You just wrote it so perfectly and I loved your interpretation of their relationship, and you were also still able to keep them a little in character up to the last moment *sighs dreamily* Well, I'm off next to the sequel, hopefully ;) Thanks for the read!
| Yoshino chapter 7 . 2/28/2012
awesome chapter I need more chaters pls upload more
| cb chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
| katnackticktack chapter 6 . 10/2/2011
i LOVED THIS. sure they slipped a little ooc in the end but what character doesn't when thrown into fanfiction? but seriously, i'm off to read the sequel RIGHT NOW.
| Toushii chapter 5 . 6/13/2011
I really loved this chapter, it was SO ADORABLE 3
I got torn when Shizu-chan started laughing and hurt Izaya D:
The ending scared me for a sec though ;w;
One thing though, it's not Ikebukuru, it's Ikebukuro - the O xD
I'm sorry for being a perfectionist, it's just that one little spelling mistake irked me a bit w Sorry LOL
| helterskelter-walter chapter 5 . 6/1/2011
I guess being a writer also helps you figure out what could possibly come next Or is it just me that I've seen what's going through with just a move? Man, I guess I should stop observing humans because I am so getting their thoughts correctly, haha! Oh, great job! I like the story :3 I shall now read the end :D
| Shizaya1398 chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
Loved the ending, very funny and cute! lol!
| DevilishBea chapter 6 . 5/14/2011
KYAAAAAAAAAAA! soooo cute! I loved it! must read the sequel!
| FlyingFyreFlye chapter 7 . 5/10/2011
This is a very good story, I like your writing style tremendously _
I loved the plot line and the ending was soooo cute!
I am off to start reading the sequel right now, keep up the good work!
| Cleo13RoseQuartz chapter 6 . 4/27/2011
"I-…" He closed his eyes tightly, letting out a small groan. "…I can't do it anymore."
Shizuo's grin fell. "What?" He started scrambling, trying to shimmy downward fast enough to get to his flea, but slow enough to do it safely. Doing it one armed was impossible. "Damn it, Izaya. Don't you let go."
Izaya was trying so hard. His arms felt like they were caving in on themselves, folding inside the layers of muscle and falling apart. He kicked his legs, trying to sustain himself. His face was tight. He shook his head, jaw clenching.
"Can't," he whispered. He choked a little. It was a struggle. "I can't."
loved this part almost touching and sweet. _ Loved this story keep writing for more! I'll go check the sequel now see ya!