|Reviews for Heiwajima Shizuo can sneeze?|
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 1/24
Pretty good. Allergic-to-everything!Shizuo is definitely a new headcanon! But there's just one thing:
"he felt obliged to cook, being the more 'girly' one in the relationship."
This line is really horrible. I know it pops up all over fandom, the girly uke and the manly seme falling into stereotypes and gender roles. But this line is just really blatantly sexist and difficult to get around. I don't think you were fully aware when you wrote it.
Like I said, I enjoyed the story otherwise, but try to think a bit more carefully about what you're writing in the future.
| zntkilledme chapter 1 . 6/20/2015
Perfect. I love the ending. This was awesome, thanks so much for writing this! ;}
| Bloom Flower chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
Lol! This is so freaking adorable!
| icywarm chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
I loved this.
| niallerslovelydance chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
Dawwww~ XD Adorable~
| chromiumincast chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
UWAAAH! WHY SO CUUUUUUUUTE? It was Hilarious reading this XD I kept cracking up everytime I saw the word "sneeze" :P
U need more credit, srsly
| BlackCatRunning chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
Awwwwwwh! SO CUTE! I love this pairing LOL. And this is such an adorable topic, making Shizuo all vulnerable! XDD. I love how he's like, "well, I AM human," and Izaya's like, "O.O.. HARDLY." XDDDDD! It's such a great portrayl of the relationship :D