Reviews for What Pales in Comparison
BooksAreMedicine chapter 10 . 10/7
Loved their moment and how it was both sweet and passionate
BooksAreMedicine chapter 9 . 10/7
Love the father parts, both Castle and Jim
BooksAreMedicine chapter 8 . 10/6
Lanie always knows what to say and how to react
BooksAreMedicine chapter 7 . 10/6
Good idea to include the summary of their story
BooksAreMedicine chapter 6 . 10/6
Great job pointing out just how long she had been relying on Castle
BooksAreMedicine chapter 5 . 10/6
A bit OOC for Kate but I like it
BooksAreMedicine chapter 4 . 10/6
Love the family bonding and the pastries sounded to die for
BooksAreMedicine chapter 3 . 10/6
That was a very sweet chapter with a bit of character resolution too
Guest chapter 2 . 10/5
Wow, I went from hating Josh to cheering for what he did.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/3
Glad she called him, there had to be emotional fallout from all that that only he could understand
Guest chapter 24 . 8/27
Another great story
Guest chapter 10 . 8/26
You probably write some of the best fanfics that I've ever read on this site and that's saying alot because I've read almost all of them.
GT500RonSmith chapter 21 . 6/22
Wow! Castle was just waiting for the clock to chime! Actually, both of them were! Then the argument over who loved the most! Cute stuff! I was surprised that she told him about her vision of their daughter and playing in the surf! But, Castle was so ready to hear that and so ready to give her that at the drop of a hat!

Great chapter!
GT500RonSmith chapter 20 . 6/22
The best love story ever! And I can't seem to put this version of it down!
GT500RonSmith chapter 19 . 6/22
Making love on the beach! Sounds like the right place for their start in the Hamptons!
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